National Fate: Three Street-Rat Teammates Leave Bai Yue Kui in Despair

Not bad, I hope you can strengthen those three later. Not very good

Overall, this book is pretty good. After all, it is quite to my liking. However, the main reasons are that there are too many dialogues between the audience and the word count, which is a bit watered down. Also, the three characters, except Boss Bai, don't have much plot. I will give it a 5-star rating and wait and see. After all, it is quite to my liking. Good cheers, author. I can't bear to watch it, really (urgent). It's a common problem in national history. I've translated these hundreds of thousands of words. Except for some fighting scenes, I've translated them all. I'm about to vomit. Please, please don't let the country fight against each other again, and don't make this common mistake again. It's not easy to see. This is a book that prevents me from reading. It is so long-winded that I almost vomit (uncomfortable). There are also a group of people who are looking for me all day long to find ways to make money. I am not a junkie. If you have nothing to do with me, if you want to confront me, I will accompany you. I just watched one that looked relatively good to me, okay? If I see someone come to me again and ask for channels, I will directly complain! (I am a quality person)

Come on, there are too many characters in the threesome scenes. The key is the national destiny, not the comments in the live broadcast room.

It's good to watch, but it's too watery. I dragged the first picture to the eighth picture before entering the forbidden area. There are very few scenes with the protagonist, and most of them are complaints from the audience or scoldings from other countries. Especially in chapter 27, opening a treasure chest is half a chapter. I hope it won't be so watery in the future. In the past, my comments were my comments. If there is anything wrong, everyone can tell me. Come on, author.

The three of them should have more scenes. It feels like the audience keeps looking down on the old man and they are a little angry.

Can you give the protagonist a little more atmosphere? Whose book is it about? No, I actually made a typo. No, no, I was like this because I was overworked and read other books. Yes, yes, it must be like this. I definitely didn't defend myself because I didn't read it after typing the voice input, which led to the typo.

In terms of general rationality, it is indeed good, but some details in the book are really poor and there is still a lot of room for improvement. The plot is a bit cliched and the main character in the book has few roles, and there is an obvious plot that lowers the wits. However, the protagonist's appearance is few, which avoids the collapse of the character.

There are too many comments from the author and the audience. Give three more people a chance. When will they take action?

This book is very good except for the water

Why is there a clip in the middle of the audience playing Genshin Impact? If there is Genshin Impact in the novel you write, the Emperor (the protagonist) will definitely be recognized. You have a bug. I hope the author can correct it.