Child of Fortune? Sorry, Your Destiny Is Mine Now

Looks good. Author, we are already mature readers, we can identify the CP ourselves, there is no need to specify the CP. You don't have to write about a female protagonist, and don't write about anything gay, you'll get scolded. The protagonist is a complete group favorite. Of course, the most attractive point is that the protagonist has some tricks, but they are moderate, not super powerful. Moreover, a world is originally made up of many geniuses, so I like to read books like this, A Hundred Flowers Blooming. Everyone has their own life encounters, opportunities, and achievements, and instead of relying on the protagonist to be happy, the bigger the level, the more people kill people. Finished the chase in one go. However, I always feel that as long as the names of the women are very thoughtful, the names of the men are very casual. However, there are not many female characters appearing, so it is acceptable. It's my first time writing a novel and the writing is so good. It's already very good. Keep up the good work. All in all, it's worth reading. See the world from the front. It's a game for modern times. There will be many players entering in the future. So the author's outline has been written, and the world view is very large, involving God. In short, I can follow any novel that makes sense.

This book is still very good to read. It has a fresh and elegant feeling. I don't feel that the protagonist is outrageous or overwhelming. It feels very reasonable. I also like the identity of the protagonist very much. The settings of various supporting characters are also great. Regarding the author's setting of talent entries, you can refer to Guigu Bahuang's entry. The effect is similar to the author's setting of black, white, green, blue, purple, orange, and gold. The author's entries are also very reasonable. I am very much looking forward to the author's updates. Praise

It's okay, the female nephew's image is not very good, and he can slowly fade out of sight later on. The male protagonist's character is a bit too soft, but it's just due to the early stage, and he can gradually grow up. (Fair evaluation, given five stars)

Nice! Give five stars a boost, cheers for the author I love this brotherhood! I'm so excited about the twin setting and telepathy! I am addicted to family affection! ! If you can't beat him, you can call Mu Nianci (although I haven't actively called him, but he will come to the rescue immediately if he senses it) I like it, southern Xinjiang is still too united and smells like human fireworks. Mu Yun also always looks like he is in control. This is very cool. You think you are one level higher than me, but in fact I am already in the atmosphere. Looking forward to the follow-up, author, come on! !

More Personally, I don't think there are any problems with the major topics the author writes about. Including the only female character, there has been great progress from the initial setting to subsequent changes. (However, it is best for the author not to write about emotions and ambiguity. It is indeed very uncomfortable to watch in this aspect😣) The overall idea is also good, very good, more to come Come on

This book is okay, but the update is a little slow, and there is the woman. Those who have read it and the author will definitely know who she is. Yes, it is the nephew [Chigua]. Although it was changed later, it is better to just write it off because of recklessness. Later, the protagonist will take care of it. Either don't have it or write it off. It's still okay now [Chigua]. I heard that the review is quite low. Give it a five-star review and improve it. After all, it is not bad. The author is also quite active. , Just update more.

After watching too many stories about brothers and sisters, I really like this kind of love relationship... Give me a good review www

This book is not bad. It also deleted the scenes about the female supporting characters. Although I don't care about these, it also shows that the author listens to the readers' opinions. His attitude is perfect and the writing is good. I hope the author will continue to persevere.

Overall, it's okay. The first thirty chapters are really unpopular, so you can just read it casually. I hope if you want to add some emotional drama, you can leave it at about a hundred chapters. It's already slow enough. The more people you add, the plot will drag on. You can have a confidante, but we can write about it in a light-hearted way. After all, most online articles are caused by the collapse of a partner. Don't make assumptions about relationships. Two people don't need to be tightly tied together. After all, who has left. Who can't live anymore, and if there is a relationship, it must be a match, at least the goal should be general, the strength should be equal, and there is no need to accommodate too much for the other person, or you can simply establish a partner. As for the subsequent plot, it is enough to have an idea, and the female partner is not brainless. I hope these suggestions can be modified or referred to without destroying the author's outline. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes.

I think this book is quite good, but the female nephew in the early stage is a bit annoying, but I can understand it. As a junior, as long as it doesn't collapse in the later stage, it will definitely become popular. It's best not to have any emotional drama. Come on, author [note]