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Not bad, come on author!

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Longyang for 1,000 years, White Snake has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Yi for 3,000 years, Yiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. One day, one day, one month, a frail young girl was lying beside the bed, with a slight smile on her lips. Her outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of her eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update..."

It's well written. The protagonist's character should be closer to Morax during the Demon God War than to a social loser.

It's pretty good-looking, at least it suits my taste. Come on, author (don't let Lin Yelan be the heroine!)

(Advice to the author)Leave a comment Let's talk about the shortcomings first: 1. It is not recommended for authors to write the emotional line of the "protagonist" 2. Zhongli doesn't talk about generalizations every day. Please pay attention to the fluency of the language (it only represents my feelings) 3. Appropriately provide some level control (the Ruotuo Dragon King's level is too high and will easily collapse in the early stage. It can be said that the protagonist is not a chieftain to limit the Ruotuo Dragon King's level improvement) 4. Don't think that a woman is a good person when you see her. Instead, kill or kill. (In vernacular, don't just leave a woman when you see her. As long as she has a different stance from the protagonist, she is an enemy) Next, let me talk about the direction I recommend the author to write: from now on, the level of Control Ruoduo Dragon King will be improved so that the plot of Teyvat can be "reflected" by the author (some comparisons are enough, it will be the same regardless of the plot) The Three Kingdoms of Tiwatri, the Hall of Purity, Immortals, etc. Can be written as clubs (isn't it strange that universities have clubs?) The author had better modify the value of Guan Hongzhi appropriately (this is optional) Finally, let's talk about the current highlights of this book: there is no heroine (to be determined), the character of the protagonist is slightly broken (it can be brought back later), and it is not considered brainless (the IQ of some supporting characters is online) (If the author replies, I can discuss it with you and I can also make some suggestions)

This book is good, good luck to the author.

In terms of general rationality, this book is good, but there are some

From a general rational point of view, this book is very good, but I don't know if there is a female protagonist. My personal opinion is that I hope there is not one. After all, sometimes the female protagonist is really annoying. Unless the female protagonist is also relatively strong in combat, she will not just hide behind others and act like a spoiled child.

In terms of universal rationality, this book is truly the best of all time, so I will give you a reward or two, and the bill will be recorded on Dada Duck