The Journey Home Begins at Sea

This book is very good, why doesn't anyone read it?

It's pretty good, but there are a lot of plot settings at the beginning. If you browse it faster, it won't affect your reading. Everyone has their own preferences. The author's timeline progresses very quickly at the beginning, and then slowly enters the plot. The setting and everything are pretty good. I like the fact that it respects the setting of the original work. What I hate most when reading fan fiction is that characters in the plot use words that don't fit the character's setting, as well as the use of modern language vocabulary for no reason.

I had an exam recently. My sister taught me biology. She asked me how the extramembrane potential changes when excitement is conducted on nerve fibers. I said I don't know. She said it changed from positive to negative. I said I couldn't remember what to do. She kissed me and said, "I kissed you like this and gave you a stimulus, and you became negative."

The plot is compact, the logic is smooth, and I'm not a bastard [I'm about to cry] If you're following the ship, you can update it faster, but if you're fighting a war, it doesn't matter if it's slower. After all, you have to be more rigorous when playing, and don't lose your combat power. Some people like to struggle with that. Come on😊

I have one thing to say, this book is really good. The protagonist is not a virgin, and the protagonist did not show too much power on the boat. He only gave Luffy and others the impression that he was rich and generous. When it was over, I didn't even know what I was talking about. That's it.

Very good, come on! In fact, the purpose of writing a book is for yourself and your book friends who have similar ideas or fantasies to yourself. Don't pay attention to those words of criticism for the sake of criticism, just stick to your own ideas and write them down. Come on!

I feel pretty good so far, come on, don't let it slip.

The only relatively logical novel is One Piece, but hey, it's already 40 years ahead of its time. Why haven't you taken over the world after preparing for so long? Forget it, let me recommend it to you. This novel is quite good and deserves a five-star rating.

Very creative

A different story ~ not bad