Demon Slayer: My Brothers Are an Upper Rank and the First Swordsman

This is so well-written! I'm completely hooked! The protagonist's presence perfectly complements Yoriichi's character flaws, and the detailed depiction of family affection is absolutely brilliant! Your portrayal of Yoriichi's humanity shines through even more! Keep it up! Keep updating, bro, I'm rooting for you!

Up to the part where the protagonist, Haru, went to sunbathe and didn't die, I could call it a masterpiece. If the author had stopped there, I wouldn't have felt it was a bad ending; I would have felt it was just right. While the later parts weren't as impactful as the earlier ones, they were still captivating enough. In summary, this is the best Demon Slayer fanfiction I've ever read.

Great book! Great book! Great book! Yoriichi Tsugikuni in Demon Slayer is truly tragic. He lost his wife, his brother became a demon, he was blamed and banished by the Demon Slayer Corps, and he's not good at expressing himself. The author gave Yoriichi someone he could rely on, making this god-like swordsman more vivid and more human!

This book is definitely among the top-tier works in the Demon Slayer genre, but unfortunately, its title and synopsis can deter many readers. I've seen it recommended more than once, but I never read it because of the synopsis; I only picked it up later when I was looking for something to read. Overall, the plot is very smooth and original.

I absolutely love it! This is the first Demon Slayer book I've ever liked. The others were just passable, but this one is truly amazing! 🥰 The author frequently interacts with readers, has very few typos (practically none), the quality is top-notch, and the writing style is very delicate! 😘 Finally, author, please update soon! [Please update more frequently!] I'm begging for your attention! 😘

Please: "A beauty that could shame the moon and shame the flowers, a beauty that could make fish sink and geese fall from the sky, a beauty that could topple kingdoms, gentle and virtuous, charming and graceful, with a thousand kinds of grace and elegance, a beauty that could rival the heavens and the fragrance of flowers, a face as beautiful as the moon, bright eyes and white teeth, lightly…

Honestly, I think this is the best Demon Slayer fanfiction. All the characters are perfectly in character (OOC), and it's not a traditional system novel, so the characters feel very well integrated into the story. The plot and character descriptions are also excellent. Please, author, keep updating! It's really good, highly recommended!

It's a wonderful read. The author uses the most gentle language to express the most direct emotions, which are heartwarming. Whether it's Tsugikuni Hiru's childlike nature, Tsugikuni Yoriichi's gentleness towards his family and his tolerance towards others, or Rengoku's fiery passion, they all feel like deeply emotional individuals, not just characters depicted in words.

Without resorting to clichés, the protagonist redeems a character who should have died, a truly heartbreaking situation. It's not contrived; the plot flows smoothly and comfortably. It's hard to believe these characters were supposed to be dead, and everyone is perfectly on screen.

I'm not much of a talker, but I think this book is exceptionally well-written, vivid, and engaging. It's the kind of book that unfolds slowly and steadily, portraying each character's personality with remarkable detail, allowing you to truly understand them. It's also the first book to make me burst into tears.