Harry Potter: A Guide to Saving the Wizarding World

The character of the heroine is really impressive. Her love for Draco is dedicated and deep. I have read many articles about Draco, but this one is really good. Of course, there is also the Room of Requirement on the eighth floor~~ (wonderful). Their love is really sweet. I hope the author will work hard. More people will definitely read this great article.

A career-oriented heroine, dual business online, excessive sugar content, and cp conflicts in almost one chapter. It avoids stupid misunderstandings and gives people an experience of being willing to trade a small knife for big sugar. Draco and the heroine have to do it almost every time (I personally like it) Advantages: The characterization is sincere, profound and vivid, it's like watching them fall in love for real. The fragile Draco wants to be kissed so much The plot is coherent and logical. You can't find any mistakes in this aspect. It reads very smoothly. Disadvantages: There are traces of over-deliberate description in the process of eliminating the characters' contradictions, which is a bit green. This is also slightly reflected in the personal description of the characters. You can read Zhang Ailing (personally prefer the description: she wears a floor-length robe, which is the brightest moist green, and dyes green when it is stained with anything.) This will make the article richer, and the author still lacks some magical touches. The heroine's ability is much better than Draco's. Due to her personal personality, she likes lovers who are equally matched. Love u [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

This is the first HP fanfic that I have read and liked very much. The love between Fierna and Draco is passionate and beautiful, so [laughing evilly] Da, I want Xiaoduo's fanfic [adoration] [adoration] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

Friends, I highly recommend this book! ! ! Let's just say that this book is very, very good, and the daily life of Filner and Master Xiaolong is so sweet! ! ! And there are many special and indescribable benefits, cough cough cough... (Can this be said?) [Smile][smile][smile]

I really love it, especially the character of the heroine is simply the setting of my dreams!! [Adoration] And this is the only novel I can read without skipping chapters!! I hope the author will continue to work hard and not stop updating [laughing]

A good book, but uh uh uh, there is no need to spend a lot of time writing about other men's love for the heroine in the story about Draco and the heroine's love. This makes readers like me not know how to view the relationship between the three of them. It's quite annoying. I was very determined to criticize the hero and heroine, but after seeing Theodore's firm love for the heroine, I was a little shaken by Durfee's position in my heart. But overall, it's really good and very interesting. I highly recommend it.

It's good to watch, and the fact that Dumbledore is the villain is very eye-catching. When I first read the original work, I liked Dumbledore very much in the early stage, but when he died, I was not sad. It was a bit numb. I felt that I didn't like some of his actions, but after all, it was for the sake of the overall situation. Sifu is my favorite, I want to cry [cry]

This book is so sweet. I've been blown away. In fact, I've seen a lot of comments from people saying that the character design is not good or there are other issues. In fact, I think it's pretty good-looking overall. It's not easy for the author to write such a good article. There's nothing particularly bad about it. In fact, I think it's all okay. The author's writing is very good. I'm looking forward to Snape's writing, although it's a bit scummy, but it's also very consistent. I don't think Snape will casually discover his love for Lily because of another person's advances. And it's good that Ezra's character doesn't attack, but it's true that Slytherins are good at losing their loved ones. I personally feel that Ezra is already very painful. Although he is taking advantage, it is indeed to atone for his sins. But it is also very unfair to her. But is this fair to Snape? It's unfair for him to be taken advantage of by Dumbledore. I think the author has worked very hard to write the plot. Although there may be some shortcomings, there is no perfect writing in the world, right? At least this one has redeemed a lot of the meaning of the original work. I think this article is very good.

I recommend Deha, but Draco in this book is so good! It may be a bit OOC but it doesn't affect my enjoyment of watching it. (To put it bluntly, there is no malice at all) The author's writing style may be more general if you look closely, and the words are very commonly used. ! But the plot is very interesting, the setting and everything are very interesting, and it is very comfortable to watch [Sending my heart]

My favorite HP fanfic is Sword Sect. I hope Sijiao can be happy forever. The super gentle Theodore, I love the extra story. Finally, the story of Draco and Ferna is not over yet, let me slowly get better together [Love]