I’m the Straw Hat Crew’s Vice Captain, and I Simply Can’t Be Killed

Hehehe [laughing evilly], that's great👍🏾. I hope I can find someone to marry Aunt Snake. [Sinister smile]

In fact, I think this is good. Don't turn into a girl [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]. Sometimes I would rather he be asexual than have a gender. Maybe it's selfish, but don't become a girl [almost crying] [almost crying] I really like this novel [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The theme is very good, I just hope I won't be timid again later.

I'm so touched that I finally have a slightly normal protagonist. Obviously in reality, most people get scared when they see a gangster, and they want to run away when they are surrounded by five or six people, but in the novel, it is not "normal" not to kill a tiger at the beginning, or to fight ten knife-wielding gangsters by one person.

The writing is quite good, but I have a very big question, that is, how can Gray Wolf and Spongebob get a green card? If nothing else, these two are really bugs. Let's not talk about Spongebob, just the terrifying invention of Gray Wolf. Power, that's simply invincible, okay? Moreover, Spongebob is immortal and can absorb water without limit. You say he is invincible. The key is that he ignores damage. So I have a very big question, why are these two just green cards? I can't figure it out, I can't figure it out.

Apart from being too cowardly, it's still pretty good.

Later, you can let the protagonist and Sauron cp. ? I feel like a pervert

I read it for a long time but forgot to rate it. Now I will focus on this book. Why did Ultraman not eat snail noodles after defeating Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf dominated Gou Xiong Ridge? Is it because Conan and Dio paused time? Or is it because Grandpa Niu's true identity as the Dragon King God of War shocked them. In Grandpa Niu's anger, 30,000 soldiers surrounded them, but they were not afraid at all, because Crayon Shin-chan came to support them later.

Currently I am the only Pirates fanfic that I don't think I can get enough of, I love watching it👀 [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The plot of this novel is very good. The only shortcoming is the early character portrayal of the protagonist, which is cowardly! Totally cowardly! Ridiculously cowardly! In terms of personality, he and Orochimaru cannot be similar, they can only be said to be unrelated, which makes some readers feel uncomfortable and gives him a lot of one stars. If this kind of personality is paired with some funny anime characters, the gap between readers will be small. Although there will still be one star, it will not be like this. But if you pair this character with someone labeled as "perverted" and "cold-natured", the gap is like "the Milky Way falls into the sky". This will dissuade a group of people at the beginning, and if the character cannot be controlled properly and make the character change more natural, some readers will be dissuaded. But this does not mean that the author's writing is not good. On the contrary, under these circumstances, the author still received a lot of praise, which is enough to prove that the author's writing style is very good. Therefore, if the author publishes the next book, he can pay attention to it. He should think about how to write the beginning, then look at how the character can be connected with the main content of his novel, and finally connect it with the previous one. This may achieve unexpected results. (≧▽≦) Big cheers for the author [like][like][like] I'm just a passerby, so I'll give an objective review. Please be gentle if you criticize me🙏🙏🙏, and there may be some typos, I hope it won't affect everyone.