Help, Jianghu! The Adorable Little Girl Is Actually a Sickly Empress

This is a super nice book (definitely not author Yu Yan threatening me). The memory of the female protagonist has awakened, and the male protagonist takes the blame for time travel. It is a daily novel about cultivating immortals. I have to say: the author will update it as soon as possible.

So pretty! The author's logic is very good, but there are still some flaws! I always like to read the emotional lines of characters. Come on, author! It's really hilarious! Hahahahaha, sometimes some jokes really make people laugh!

I only watched the tender moments with the male protagonist before the heroine ascended to the devil world, and the ending. I don't know why, but I suddenly became irritable, and I was upset halfway through. Although the writing style of the whole story needs to be improved, each story can be deeply rooted in people's hearts. Although the plot is not perfect, the characters and stories of each character are impressive, and the framework of the world view is well constructed. Each story seems to be happening around me. Of course, the five stars are mainly due to the fact that the heroine turns into a yandere in the later stages. This not only contrasts with the cuteness and scheming hidden in the early stage, but also highlights the emotional changes of the hero towards his apprentice. I hope the author can improve his writing style in the future and take readers' opinions into consideration in a timely manner. I have seen many such works, and they usually start with some place or sect. Although this kind of beginning can reflect where the beginning of the story happened, I think it can show piecemeal some of the things that happened to the protagonist later that changed the whole story. Also, I hope that the author will not determine who the heroine is in the early stage. Readers will screen one by one to see which of the women who appear in your article is better. It does not mean that the audience will adopt whichever one they think is the heroine. Only by foreshadowing the emotions can they ensure that the heroine will not dissatisfy the readers later. Finally, I would like to praise the author. Although I only read half of it, I didn't find many typos. There is also a problem that some authors often make. They like to write some of the author's words in the text. Of course, I can also understand the author's difficulties. If you put the words in the chapter comments, some readers may just skip it. Finally, I'm not saying that I think there's anything wrong with the author. After all, life is about constant experimentation and experience. I believe your writing will become even more refined!

The author's writing power is getting longer and longer. This time it is obviously better than the previous two, and it doesn't seem so abrupt. Come on [grieved][pout]

The writing is very good, the author is capable, and he really kills the villains. The plot is very funny, there are many twists and turns, it will be very humorous, the characters are also very vivid, and it is not a paper man template. The author has a strong desire to survive [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying], and all the suspected poisonous points are clearly explained. It is a good book worth reading. Finally, loli girls, please grow up quickly, I want to eat them [staring]

It looks good, but the update is too damn slow. I suggest the author give me an address. By the way, I have a friend who wants to ask you what kind of sacks you like.

The writing is wonderful. The whole book is basically centered around the male and female protagonists. It can be said that it is very suitable for my taste. I really like the soft and cute character of the female protagonist. Haha, the only regret is that the book is a bit short. After reading it, I still feel unfinished. I will continue to pay attention to the author's new works. Come on!

This book is different from previous time travels The male protagonist left his previous life and traveled to modern times, and then traveled back for a new round of reincarnation (history repeats itself) and thus gained immortality for three lives. Later, the male protagonist was attacked as an immortal, which stimulated the Demon Emperor, and the Demon Emperor awakened (the male protagonist's memory has not been restored at this time)... Friends who don't understand may find the previous part confusing, and it will basically be explained by the second volume. The visibility is still very high

Good reviews. The inner portrayal of the characters is quite delicate, the plot is not sluggish at all, and the plot is very comfortable to watch. It didn't take long for me to finish it selflessly. I also wish Susu and Lingfeng will never be separated [eating melon]

There are a lot of pitfalls in the front of this book, but they are all filled in at the end. The plot logic is very strict. I read it carefully and found that there are no plot holes. The author's writing style is very good and can bear a score of nine points, but the number of words is a little less. You can write a little more about character creation, but don't overdo it. Come on, author, and keep up the good work. @ [Eating melon]