Football: My Serie A Debut

The writing is very good, this is like a normal football literary development route, not a direct invincible insider. But while I prefer this, it's harder for the author to write. This kind of slow-paced article must be a long one, so it will be more difficult to control the author's rhythm, and more people will give up in the later stage, resulting in lower income. However, I still hope that the author can finish this article. There are too few slow-paced footballs nowadays. Come on, author!

The last time I saw you was the last time

Can you update a few more chapters every day? [Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying]

Very good, the overall rhythm is between Lin Hai Tingtao's Fox in the Forbidden Zone and Invincible Wen

It's okay, but the language needs to be organized. It feels like it was piled up directly without any drafting.

Come on, it looks pretty

The writing is very good, but the update speed is a bit slow, and it is suspected of being unfinished.

Juventus, who has always been scary, let me know your address and I will show you what terror is😡😡😡

You can also take a look at this, I personally like this style, haha

Not bad, I think it's ok