Football: My Serie A Debut

Well written! This is more like a normal development path for a football novel, not the kind that's immediately invincible. However, while I prefer this style, it's more difficult for the author to write. This kind of slow-paced story is bound to be long, which increases the difficulty of controlling the pacing and dealing with the reduced income due to many readers abandoning the story later.

The last time I saw you was the last time

Could you please update a few more chapters every day? 😢😢😢😢

Very good, the overall pacing is somewhere between Lin Hai Ting Tao's "Fox in the Forbidden Zone" and "Invincible" novels.

It's alright, but the language needs some organization; it feels like it was just piled up without any draft.

Keep it up, it's really good!

It's well-written, but the update speed is a bit slow, and it seems like it might be left unfinished.

Juventus, you've always been terrifying. If I let you know your address, I'll show you what true terror is! 😡😡😡

This one's worth checking out. I personally like this style, haha.

Not bad, I think it's good.