Naruto: A Frozen Fruit from the Start

Author, keep up the good work! (ง•̀_•́)ง

Feedback section! This is my first time writing, so please feel free to offer any suggestions.

Don't be lazy, get to work!

He's quite intelligent, a cunning and mischievous guy, but the more you look at his actions, the more he seems like a villain—quite ruthless. In short, it's all about winning or losing. If you succeed, you'll be revered like Cao Cao, the Emperor Wu of Wei; if you fail, you'll be infamous like Dong Zhuo.

It's great! Keep it up! I just don't want the author to add a female subordinate or create any ambiguous relationships later on! The plot and writing style are fine, it's very good, but it's way too short. Ten chapters a day, is that even possible?

She has too many abilities.

It's quite satisfying to watch, but honestly, the best scenario right now is for Devil Fruits not to reincarnate, or for them to automatically reincarnate into the system, giving the protagonist control over the process. Perhaps there's even a patch where the protagonist can erase and strip the power of a Devil Fruit from someone else.

Well written, supplies I regret it; the flaws are too great.

I think the plot of this book is quite exciting. Reading it, I feel it truly captures the charm of Devil Fruits. Other books about Devil Fruits don't quite match this one. It's like the Naruto synopsis, but it's not quite there, which is a bit disappointing.

It's alright, quite good. I've also read some other people's comments. Personally, I can accept the multiple Devil Fruits. As for the Observation Haki binding, if you're referring to the part where he puts his hand on Full Moon's shoulder, he didn't mention Observation Haki binding. And since it's the Ice-Ice Fruit, have you considered that it might be a power counter? 🤔 Just my personal opinion.