The Legend of Luo Luo: From Black Armored Beast to Red Armored War King

It's really exciting. Compared with other Lolo Adventures fan novels, this novel has a much larger world view, and the descriptions are also more detailed, including level battles. It's not bad at all, the author is great👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍 🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻Come on! ! ! More chapters! ! ! Currently about 100 chapters in, the strength status of Pig's Knuckle is: Red Star C level, corps leader, about 70,000 elites + 200,000 recruits One of my subordinates is Chuanliu, directly under the guard captain, D-level awakening. Second subordinate: Xuan Yao, adjutant and leader of the First Banner, D-level awakening, with rough and fine characteristics. Three of His Men: Feng Yi, leader of the Second Banner, D-level awakening, characterized by strategy Four of His Men: Gold or something, leader of the Third Flag, D-level awakening, with brave characteristics Five of His Men: Weird, leader of the fourth flag, D-level awakening, characteristic of being ruthless and not talking much. Sixth subordinate, I forgot the name, the leader of the fifth flag, D-level awakening, characterized by strategic vision.

It doesn't look like a novice novel. The characters are vivid and even better than the original. Unlike other fanfics that simply write about the adventures of Lolo, this book obviously has the feature of "war", so it is more to my liking. I hope the author will continue to work hard and continuously improve his level. The technology in this book seems to be related to the industrial revolution. Is it possible to create a Red Army or something?

It's okay, the troop sources are reasonable, the level upgrades are clear, and the character plots are quite good. It is recommended that some restrictions be added to later levels, just like in Taoism. If you want to upgrade after reaching a certain level, you need to break through the restrictions, but there are dangers.

How should I put it? This book should be a relatively good one among fan works. Other systems just send hundreds of thousands or hundreds of thousands of soldiers, or generals, which looks disgusting. This book is relatively better. The combat power is not broken, and the plot is reasonable. It is very enjoyable to read. I hope it won't break down in the future (ﾉД`) At the same time, I have to add more updates, it's not enough.

Overall, it's pretty good. Some of the details are quite delicate. I just feel that the protagonist's growth rate is a bit slow. What about the part where the King of Robots appears in the back? Should I write it in detail?

A rare Luo Luo Adventures (Martial War Dao) fan novel. The characters are flesh and blood, and there are basically no poisonous points. The author's second world view is more reasonable and basically logically self-consistent. Among the Wu Zhan Dao (Luo Luo Adventures) fan fiction, I only represent my personal opinion that it is a well-deserved first-class novel.

Very good, ヽ(*´з｀*)ﾉ Keep working hard, keep at it, don't be a eunuch! ! ! Come on😊, keep updating (づ ●─● )づ The character creation is really good, affectionate and righteous (σ′▽‵)′▽‵)σ Looking forward to the follow-up content, come on! The author's writing is quite good. Most of them are about the adventures of Luo Luo. There are very few about the martial arts. Although the plot of the original work is similar, the characters in the martial arts are more handsome (๑> <๑) The Adventures of Lolo kinda. . . It looks so crude [laughing]

It's very novel, the writing is good, the characters are normal (I haven't seen the character's character collapse), everyone's IQ is still intact (on the basis of maintaining the character), and the protagonist's outlook on life is still intact. It's a good book and worth reading.

Well, the author's writing is pretty good, but the endless narration and too many adjective modifications are confusing. It doesn't mean that the words I wrote have depth. Enough is good, and it's better to be less clear. There are also three or four sentences that are really painful to read into one sentence. Many of them are inverted sentences (not sure), which makes it even more uncomfortable to read. Maybe it's because of the reasons I mentioned above. It took me four full days to read more than 30 chapters. I was really reading it seriously, so I took my time. However, these chapters gave me the feeling that it was like a year, and I briefly read them later and found that they had no impact at all. Oh my god, I feel like this for the first time in my life. The writing is obviously good, but I can't even read it. Many times it takes me a long time to read a line of words. I want to roughly "translate" the author's meaning with my thoughts. Of course, I may be exaggerating! There is also a passage in the book that many people say is awkward. I think it is because the passage is very complicated and may not be what the author really meant. The words are a bit cliche. It would be great if the author can write as he wants. If all the above are just for the sake of word count, I will not say it. In terms of details, whether it is combat details or dialogue details, it is very rough. The description of the characters' emotions is not good but a bit full. The author is still great. After all, he is a newbie. I hope the author can stick to this path. Come on, author. I hope xdm won't scold me, it's all based on my feelings. (No malicious intent) [Like]

It's really the most immersive and enjoyable fanfic I've ever read among Lolo Adventures! The war was really vividly described, and when I was watching the drama, I was really upset about the black armored beasts [crying] The author worked hard to code the words, and I am sure [please update][please update] Good-looking, really good-looking. Keep following me.