Reverse Transmigration: My Bal Isn't Adorable to Begin With

Such a good book should not be buried, good luck to the author! ! Oh, this is my large size, that's okay. [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

This is one of the best Genshin Impact fanfics I have ever read. The writing style is soothing and addictive, and it does not cause visual fatigue. It is a rare good novel. (It's just that the author is a bit short and the updates are so slow that it almost made me depressed) Why hasn't the author updated yet? I'm speechless. It's been two days since I updated.

Personally speaking, this book is very good. After all, Tomato rarely writes about this kind of thing. Most of them are about the protagonist traveling to Genshin Impact. Either the shadow suddenly wants to marry the protagonist, or the protagonist says he wants to marry the shadow, and the shadow really agrees. Emmmm, why is this book with more than 60 reviews and no rating yet? I saw a book with more than 40 reviews and ratings.

The five stars are only for the author or readers to see that the subject matter of the article is very good, otherwise I would not read it. I have seen about 50% of it. There is a very obvious problem. I don't know whether the author is a newbie or because he has a habit of not reading it once. The narrative in the article is fragmented, and the preface and the follower often do not match up, which will lead to a very poor impression. If you don't believe it, new readers can just click on a chapter from the front, middle and back to read, basically every chapter has it. This kind of question seems to have a sense of obstruction. If this point is not changed, it will probably dissuade many people. I have persisted until now by relying on my love for Thor (), and now it is a bit unbearable. If the author can see this comment of mine, I hope the author will take the time to read it by himself after finishing a chapter, or find someone to read it. After all, the author is a fan of the authorities, so don't write whatever you think. The most important thing for an article is that it is smooth, and I don't want this book whose subject matter is not to my liking to be lost. I looked through the comments and all of them said that the writing was very good. Maybe my requirements are too high (is this too high?). After all, this is Tomato, there's nothing you can do about it

It's strange. Why is there no such good book? Come on, author [I learned it] New readers must read Shuquan. The book itself doesn't have much sugar, but Shuquan's candies are too sweet [laughs]

Reading this book can make up for my fantasy of the second dimension, and it can also soothe my soul that is worn out by the world. It can be said to be an excellent work that makes Yu feel comfortable and relaxed. The person who wrote the book may be talented and extraordinary. Although we have no personal relationship, I sincerely thank you for this book.

This book is really in line with my current taste. I couldn't stop laughing while I was reading it. My aunt was laughing the whole time. I originally planned to read it after reading it for more than ten chapters, but it made me feel itchy. It was really comfortable to read.

It's a good book, but I've read too many stories about "Genshin Impact" and "Opening the Harem" and all kinds of mindless stories. The slow-paced development seems very precious. There are not many poison points, so you can rest assured to pursue them, no knife (currently) When I see the author being criticized, let me tell you my opinion. Most daily novels are criticized. There is no escaping this. The reason is nothing more than the procrastination of the plot. But if you look at the Wenxin-oriented daily novels with a single female protagonist, do you still want to directly reject them? That's not funny. The development pace of this book is generally in line with reality. Whether as friends or further relationships, these emotions need to be tempered. I would like to give the author a few suggestions. First, the identity of Ah Ying's gangster still needs to be resolved, but it is best not to hastily turn it into a poisonous point. It still needs to be handled reasonably. Second, the identity of the protagonist should be explained a little more. The Riddler would feel uncomfortable. (If it is planned to take Ah Ying back to meet his grandma later, I didn't say it.) The third is my personal opinion. I hope that the protagonist speaks first and is sincere, so that people can feel his growth better, instead of just being interested in Ah Ying as a character in a game and taking responsibility. Come on (*^ω^*)

This book is very good (≧∇≦*), with a daily style, so if you want to read a mindless and cool article about the heroine, please leave. The emotional line is well described, daily updates, the sweetness is moderate, and it will not suddenly feed you a mouthful of shit┐(─__─)┌, and the author often interacts with readers, as long as you speak rationally, the author will discuss with you, it is a very good book, I hope you don't want to be a eunuch (›´ω`‹) Bet: If this book becomes popular, the male protagonist's behavior in Chapter 36 will definitely include a lot of people who don't have lychees and pancakes. I bet 50 cents on spicy strips [Thoughts]

I don't understand why the rating is only 8.4. Although the book is not very noble and passionate, it is true and sensible, and combines fantasy and reality. Just like "novel comes from life, but is higher than life." This book is not as rich and sweet as toffee, but has a light fragrance of mint. Anyway, take your time and watch it, it's really good | ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ