The Fourth Calamity: I Keep All These Goofy Players in Captivity

Big boost to the author, but I think the pace of the plot is a bit fast and could be slowed down appropriately. There is also a level of strength that I still don't know how to divide [face-covering] and [face-covering], as it doesn't seem to be in the text. I think this strength system should be more complex. It can't just be the mystical sequence and warriors. The world view seems to be quite large. You can consider adding the system of spiritual cultivation of spiritual energy recovery and martial arts of the high martial world, plus the sequence system of the Lord of Mysteries. Can the author tell me the division of strength levels [face covering]

It looks good, but the protagonist's sense of presence and participation is too low. Has the author seen "This Game is Too Real"? It is also about the same theme, but the background is a wasteland. Five-star support [laughing]

I think it's pretty good, very nice I think what the author wrote is quite interesting

Let's put less emphasis on the duration [laughs awkwardly]