A Plain, Ordinary Honkai Impact 3Rd and Genshin Impact Fanfic

I give myself four stars, the one star difference is because of the writing. Hum~ The front part may be a bit messy and boring, but the further I go, the more confident I become, and I feel like the rest of the writing is quite good (although the writing is still not that good, send it, Ababa Ababa~)

In terms of general theory Not bad I haven't read it for a long time, but there have been so many updates. The author is awesome!

I think this book is generally good, but too much ink is spent describing other characters in the book. This book is essentially a second-generation fanfic. Most readers have a certain understanding of other characters in the book, so I think more ink should be spent on describing the interaction between the protagonist and other characters. At the same time, the sense of fragmentation during the transition is too strong. I often don't know what I am watching while watching it. Moreover, I think the transition plot can be used as a foreshadowing of the interaction with the protagonist in the subsequent chapters. I think the biggest attraction of this book is the collision between the ideological culture from another world and the ideological culture of this world, rather than how the protagonist is saved in that world. Moreover, I feel that the protagonist's heart is a bit too fragile. The protagonist is also described as too humble and too cautious. After a few chapters, we always have to pay attention to the protagonist's physical and mental health again. The above are the biggest shortcomings of this book in my opinion. As for the advantages, I think the daily interactions between the protagonist and various characters in the book are very interesting. I hope the author can write more interesting interactions. Finally, I hope the author will work harder to write this book. I still like this book.

I like this article very much, although sometimes I think about sword stories or battle scenes, but I always get tired of this kind of battle. It is precisely because it is daily that everyday articles do not make people feel tired, because they seem to be very close to us, so I feel familiar with them. Sometimes I do not know the characters in it, but this is just like the road of life, I never know who I will meet at the next intersection. Such daily freehand writing may not be possible even if I am in the middle of it. I would like to express my gratitude to the author [smile][smile]

It's a very good novel. It doesn't have the various amazing abilities or systems of the protagonist in other novels (that I've read so far). It doesn't constantly collect harems and destroy CPs. It's mainly about daily life, and the plot arrangement is also very interesting. The character design of each character is well grasped, but the role of the protagonist in the early stage is too small, but it has no impact on the plot. The protagonist is very relevant and has a good sense of substitution. This novel makes me think that fan novels can be written like this. It's a novel experience. Come on, author!

Yes, it is my favorite daily life. The character design is almost not broken. The setting of the protagonist having no CP and the setting of traveling around the world and meeting various characters are well received. The main problem for the author now is the short message. Trust me and update more. If not more, just ten updates every day. Otherwise, you will become popular in a short time.

I'm halfway through reading it, so let me make an objective evaluation. The first fifty or so chapters felt very confusing, and some of the plots were a bit inexplicable. However, there is a clear improvement from chapter fifty onwards, which shows that the author is also working hard to improve and has contacted more and more people. The author has always paid attention to the opinions of readers. He has read too many systematic Honkai articles, and it is an option to take a look at daily life. The main text is relatively bland, and the extra chapters are quite interesting. Overall, he is an author with great potential, come on! [Like][Like][Like]

It's a very good book. I started reading it at about 80 chapters and have reached more than 300 chapters now. I really like this book by the author. It is good in every aspect. However, the updates have been a bit slow recently. It needs to be updated every few days. If you have no inspiration, you can take a break for a few months and write an outline. If you feel unwell, take more rest. Come on! I will accompany you until the end

Let me start by saying that this is a good book, but the protagonist has too few roles. However, the author also said at the beginning that he wanted to write a book without a male protagonist, but if he didn't write it, it would feel like something was missing. When I read this book, I felt the same way, and it felt very strange. , Maybe I'm used to watching from the perspective of a male protagonist, I hope the author will continue according to his own ideas, I respect the author, after all, this is not written by me, and I don't have the literary talent, so come on, I will just jump to the perspective of the male protagonist [Like] 6.8? ? ? ? ? ? ? Why so low

Daily writing that meets my expectations, I especially like this kind. Unlike the daily novel I read before, which had a single female protagonist, after Ai Li established a relationship with the male protagonist, she ended up having ambiguous relationships with various female characters. Ai Li can also eat the male protagonist He Hua's cp, which makes her whole person shocked. ——Love comes from the Starry Sky Train