Du Qing is only a low-ranking officer, yet she manages to give the mighty officials of the Northern Garrison Command endless headaches. Born with strange double pupils, the daughter of a lowly clerk was told by a fortune-telling Daoist that she wouldn’t live to see twenty. But she refuses to accept her fate and lives life to the fullest. The Commander of a Thousand quietly nods in approval: “This officer is a keeper. If there’s trouble, she’ll really step up!” Little does he know that Du Qing only works so hard because she’s eyeing his good looks. Lord He can’t take it anymore. “Please leave that man alone and come after me instead! I… have feelings for you!”
It's interesting, just a bit wordy, but overall it's good! Keep up the good work, author! 😊