In the Hidden Sand Village! My Electromagnetic Release Is a Little Too Strong

I hope this book won't be unfinished. I've personally sent away many unfinished authors [smiles], so I don't want you to be the next one [smile]

If the sand ninja develops industrialized ninja tools, they can completely invade the four major countries through economic attacks and form a community of interests, or even control them. Just like Wall Street

Ah~~~Ah~~~ I hope all authors in this world don't have to eat, drink, poop or sleep! This allows the author to code 24 hours a day! There are twenty-four hours in a day, which is 1,440 minutes or 86,400 seconds, one word per second, so the author should hurry up and update 86,400 words every day! [Sinister smile]

How should I put it? The writing is quite good, the style is good, the ideas are unique, and the descriptions are okay. The reason why it is four stars may be my problem. I feel that the plot is a bit delayed. It may be because I read too many novels and can't slow down. In Daimyo of the Land of Wind I feel that the paragraph is a bit delayed. Maybe the author is trying to better shape the character of Mu Feng, but it is a bit redundant. It is a very simple matter. If you are not satisfied with it, it is actually a good arrangement. It is purely a personal opinion. Don't criticize [Chigua] [Chigua]

Very nice. I don't know why, but some good-looking books have low scores, while books with high scores either have value issues or are either stallions or weaklings. They are so disgusting that their scores won't drop even though they have a lot of bad reviews. But this kind of book has all good reviews, but no high scores.

Very good!

Forgive me, author. . I shared this book with my daughter, and she asked me a lot of questions after reading the first chapter. . For example, why is a sandworm that is more than 100 meters tall only 3 tons? Our car is close to 2 tons. Then he asked me why 500 pounds of iron is as big as a giant rock. Ha ha,. What can I say, author, you really should relearn basic physics and basic mathematics. Nowadays, writing novels is very introverted. If your writing is not good, but if you are rigorous, reasonable, and logical, then it will basically be OK. But there are problems with your basic settings, which makes people doubt your composition.

It's very strong, the ideas are reliable and reasonable, the distribution and development of the plot are also very smooth, the characters... I feel that some of the characters are a bit rigid... Most of the mainstream ones feel okay, and they are all good. The writing style is very reasonable, the various rhythms of the writing are very stable, and it is a very interesting farming and development invincible flow.

Just force it to be scientific. What is the situation in the ninja world? In the world of personal power, do you use science or commercial science?

I wanted to give it four stars at first, but then it became three stars. It is another existence that is said to be scientific but has become a buff. You can develop whatever you want without using theory. You can do it if you feel you can do it. In the early stage, the male protagonist is not strong enough and he keeps domineering his enemies and keeps compromising. In the later stage, the male protagonist plans to rule the ninja world and tells them to either surrender or fight. His enemies suddenly become hardened and are easily destroyed by the male protagonist. This kind of cool plot is too cliche. It gives people the feeling that the whole world exists just for the male protagonist to be happy. Orochimaru also feels like an adult licking him in one bite, which feels a bit inconsistent with his character as a perverted and cold boss. When negotiating with Jiraiya, I felt that Jiraiya was passive and did not say anything to refute. Sand Shadow was incompetent. He was robbed of the task and blamed Konoha's darkness. Author, your design is a bit evil. There are also a lot of characters that are wrong, it's just for fun to watch.