Transmigration: I Arrived in the World of Overlord

This book is very good, but it has one shortcoming, it is too few, so you can make up for this shortcoming with ten updates a day [sneery laugh] [sneak laughter] [sneak laughter] [sneak laughter] [sneak laughter]

It's really good. It's a rare masterpiece among Bone King fanfics. The writing is excellent. It doesn't have the embarrassing self-indulgence and stinky writing style of other fanfics. The characters don't have a broken character. It's in line with the original setting. This is the fan fiction I have always wanted to read, rather than a hodgepodge of comics mixed with various miscellaneous elements. This is a very pure fan novel. The plot progresses very smoothly and is very comfortable to read. I have not seen such a well-written fan novel for a long time. The key point is that the protagonist does not have a system. System stories are easy to write but are too routine. The lack of a system for the protagonist feels like the best setting. It can make the protagonist look like he is not just a jobber who only follows system tasks and does whatever the system tells you. Although system-free writing is less troublesome than systematic writing, it can better portray the character of the protagonist, instead of making the protagonist look like a waste who only relies on the system. All in all, it's great to finish this book. It's great to be able to find this excellent book among Qingyishi Yuanju Bengluo Template Fans. Thank you for accompanying me. Spreading flowers to the end [blowing kisses]

I enjoyed watching it, and it basically fulfilled all my fantasies about Long Aotian's fan fiction. Thank you, the author, for allowing me to complete a fantasy world. As a front row reminder, the setting of this fan fiction is that time travel is already invincible, so if you want to see some intrigues, you can run away. If you want to see cool stories, warrior cows, sword explosions, 999 with one sword, and attacking the sand and destroying the whole audience together, you can check it out. Highly recommend. Thank you for accompanying me all the way, and I will finish spreading flowers wwww

It's a very good fan work. When I read it, I felt like I was reading Maruyama's original work. In terms of character creation and background setting, because it directly follows the original work without too much ink, it is very unfriendly to casual readers, and even animation fans may not understand it. Although this may reduce the difficulty of writing, it also limits the performance of the book. If it can be promoted in the overload circle, I believe the results will be much better. In terms of plot, I have to say that the author is very good. He has basically re-opened a new plot line without falling into the trap of traditional fan fiction. Personally, I feel that the development of the plot is as attractive as the original work, but the plot progresses too fast, as if it is over just after it begins. The main plot is too clear, resulting in the branch plots not being full enough, and losing the strong "sense of adventure in another world" of the original work. Nothing that has happened so far has exceeded the protagonist's expectations. It's like trying to answer a question without the joy of exploring the problem in the process. The original novel "Grass Snake" gradually understands the world in the process of conquering the world. A grand different world slowly unfolds in front of readers. The customs, history and culture of each country, and the rich experiences and joys, sorrows and joys of each character are all highlights. The key to all this is "novelty", which is the core competitiveness of different world novels. If fan fiction wants to transcend "fan fiction" and reach the level of original works, it must be innovative. Except for the protagonist group who cannot move, other supporting characters and unimportant characters can be changed at will. Adding some new characters and new areas can greatly enrich the interest of the article. Otherwise, all the characters who appear have appeared in the original work, and their personalities and experiences are already known, and the interest will be reduced a lot. After watching the overload, we not only remember the protagonist group, but also Annie, Gazef, Mieguo and others. These people also greatly promoted the development of the plot in the original work, and their characters also appeared vividly on the page. Since these people left early in this game, there should be new original characters to replace them. Vivid and three-dimensional characters are a precious asset of a work. I wish the author better and better as he writes and achieves good results! [Praise]

I originally thought it was another self-created Supreme Invincible style, until I saw Shizi say, "Albedo-sama laughs so wildly," and then burst out laughing with the protagonist, hahaha. The author is a true fan of overload, and the characters of these NPCs are well grasped! Come on! If you need money, please send us the payment code! Don't cut it in half! ! ! [Learned]

For every novel that I put in my hard work, no matter whether I like reading this kind of subject or not, I will leave five stars, which can be regarded as an affirmation of the author's hard work. To be honest, this novel is not bad, and there are not many of this kind of subject in Tomato. [Sending Hearts]

It's a rare Bone King novel. The main character is not the Holy Mother. He kills decisively and his IQ is online throughout. I personally think it's great. I hope the author can finish this book. I've been coming to Tomato for more than three years and I haven't seen a completed Bone King novel [face covering]

It's okay. As a bookworm of ten years, this kind of novel is very new. I recommend it. I recommend it. I have seen too many good books that are half-way through. The author must not give up on the book midway. Come on, come on, start and finish. [Learned] [Learned] [Learned]

As an Overlord fan, it is really good. Friends who are familiar with the original work or animation will like it very much. The author's writing is very good, there is almost no moisture and it is very dry, which is rare! Come on, finally a good novel has its score wiped off! Support the author!

Come on, author, this is the only Bone King fanfic on Tomato that I can read (♡˙˙♡)