Luoluo's Adventure: The War King from the Start

It can be said that this book has completely surpassed the Adventures of Lolo and has developed into a new world. It is very interesting and worth reading. At present, the author has written the "Redemptors" behind the scenes as a group of conspirators who want to overthrow the motorcycle clan and the beast clan. It is recommended that the author strengthen the protagonist. The adventures of Lolo are not the highlight The race is more about scheming. The protagonist feels more silly and sweet as the writing goes on. I don't realize how strong it is. Then there are the Sky City and the Endless Sea. At present, they are all beasts. Lu Tianming, the motorcycle race, is too strong. It is recommended to weaken it. There are too few scenes of tigers and orangutans. The tiger does not have the temperament of the hero in the original drama and is more like a Erha. Collect The wolf soldiers are too slow, and there are no intuitive statistics. I always feel that I can't figure out the strength of the protagonist. Now that the beast tribe is attacked by lightning, should we help the beast tribe? The author wants to write that the protagonist will benefit, but both sides will suffer. The beast tribe is now one-sided, and the protagonist is still fighting among themselves. This is a bit difficult to accept. Sorry, the progress of the mission is also a bit slow. Not to mention the system sign-in reward, the mission is a big one once it is given. Can the protagonist kill a few war kings or motorcycle generals to replenish themselves? Or there is no need to divide it into so many perspectives. It seems like five or six chapters divided into one day, but in fact it is like one chapter happening in each place. The plot and material selection are well written by the author. The characterization and combat power standards are a bit poor. All in all, five stars. It is worth watching. Good luck to the author [Top post][Top post][Top post]

A pretty good book and very attractive

... Why is this one only rated 7.7? I think it's quite interesting. I've read several books like this and I feel that this one is better than others. It has a grand world view and basically no typos (I haven't found it anyway). I give it five stars. Cheers to the author.

The book is very good, very exciting, and very interesting, but the update speed is too slow.

It's really unconventional, the world view is huge, and the content is beautifully connected. The author will also respond to comments in a timely manner, and there is no buying or asking for gifts, and there are no other errors in writing. There are almost no typos. The author will also draw on readers' opinions on the content. Very good, recommended

It feels completely in line with my appetite. It's a pity that the student party doesn't have much money. Otherwise, I'd definitely give you a few hundred rewards. [Like][Like][Like] Do you still need to fill in the author's world view? If you want to recruit names, you can call us and help you think about it. There are also settings and so on, the same [thinking]

It's pretty good to watch, but the overly heroic idea of ​​mobilizing a million-strong army is a bit too useless. I feel that small soldiers are useless at all, and conquering a city is too much fun. Just relying on a few generals can decide whether to defeat a battle involving 2 million soldiers or to defend a heavy city. The story is quite exciting.

This is the quality that 9 points should have [like] Looking at those paragraphs and comments from 2022, it seems that the writing was not very good at that time, and the plot was messy and so on. This is also a classic pitfall of group portrait writing. But for readers who are late to the game, there is no big problem so far. Moreover, there are "revisions" in 23 years and "new revisions" in 24 years. Even starting from the beginning of the chapter, it is said to be a revision, but it is actually almost a rewrite. With this set, the entire workload is no less than opening another book. I can only say that the author is really serious about it, and this is really unreasonable. There are still some problems behind it. For example, the original theme of the game is war. Although the three war kings are separated from the others, their magnitude is not large. Even numerical monsters like wild orangutans will be attacked and killed by a group of black panthers. And this book makes the gap between each level too big, which raises a question: since the war king/quasi-emperor are all ants, can't you do it alone? Why do you have to bring a group of soldiers with single-digit levels to increase casualties and send energy to the opponent? Another thing is that the later battles have obviously gone beyond the game world of the original work, and have developed towards cultivating immortals. Especially for the quasi-emperor, all kinds of phantom laws and even the laws of space and swallowing have come out. However, this problem is not very serious. The problem that has the greatest impact is the question of the quasi-emperor's B-square, which again involves the question of why a person should lead minions when he is able. However, the rating will not be changed. After all, overall the flaws are not concealed, and it is indeed rare for an author to be so attentive. It is much better than other mindless articles on this subject. The final quasi-emperor battle (the battle process is very confusing), the demon king battle (same as above) and the unification battle (several beast emperors are a bit subdued and OOC) are all a bit failed in writing, but the extras are really a plus.

Yes, this is the second book I found accidentally. It is a good novel about martial arts. The author is very innovative and adds many races. The plot is also very different. What is the point of watching a fan blindly copy the original plot? Just like puppets, you have to have your own thoughts. Fan fiction is about innovation. The author originally scored 9.1 On Tomato but changed the scoring system and dropped to 6 overnight. Now the author has scored 9.2 Again, which is really awesome.

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