I Opened a Shanhai Kindergarten in the Stars

It's very interesting. The whole Qiushi logic is online. Some casual moments can be matched with the subsequent plot. Because the protagonist is Bai Ze and his friends are also ancient demons, it is understandable that they are strong. This is more popular than brainless cool novels. Moreover, both the attacker and the subject have big responsibilities on their shoulders. Falling in love is not something that can be done in this time period. The author has not written it clearly. So I think the whole book should be divided into two volumes. The timeline of the two volumes should be after the big monsters successfully return to Blue Star. It is more reasonable to fall in love at that time. The marshal has already started to have secret love in his heart. Bai Ze, as a great demon, should have noticed it but did not mention it clearly. It depends on how the author writes the emotional line. The plot line of the whole book is exciting, coherent and novel. The difficulty lies in how to write the emotional line between the two protagonists well. If it can be written well, then this book will definitely get a score of 9.0 Or above. Small suggestion: As a novel with 4,000 words per chapter, this book is very likely to cause the loss of readers. You can appropriately add some small extras with different timelines and different characters' perspectives, which may be easier to capture the hearts of readers. The ending is not good, it can be said that it is a pity. There are many pitfalls that have not been filled in. The emotional line is basically not written, and the emotional transition is not outstanding. As a dual-male protagonist, his writing is incompetent, but the plot lines are all good. I hope there will be a sequel.

Nice! ! ! There is a warm feeling! But I have a feeling that there will be some knife attacks later, and I really hope that Bai Ze and other big demons can go home safely! Ah ah ah ah ah Blue Star must be well! ! [Almost crying] [Almost crying] Update soon! [Please update] Also: Da Baize and the kitten are really cute! ! [Send heart][Send heart]

To be honest, this novel is very rare. There are not too many emotional lines until the finale, and the two protagonists are not together. To be honest, it is really novel, but when I think about it, it is also good to give readers a suspense. Their ending develops slowly in their world, and it is good not to let us know. First of all, it is because the life spans of humans and mythical beasts are not equal. The first thing that comes to my mind is the theory of life span. So the two of them are not together in the finale. Even in the extra episode, they are well aware of their own situation and know each other's thoughts, but they will not be together, so this point is better written. And I feel that there are too many fighting parts, and I can't understand some parts. But the finale is still good. Everyone has their own characteristics, which is very good for a novel.

The plot is compact but not procrastinating. The characters are all well-shaped and have distinct personalities. Every big monster is working hard for Blue Star. Bai Ze will not fall in love with the marshal after only meeting a few times and getting along for a while, nor will he delay important matters because of personal feelings. I give him a thumbs up. It looks good, I love watching it [please update]

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This novel is very well written and has an engaging storyline that makes you want to keep reading. On the whole, the writing is smooth and the characterizations are vivid. The language and writing style of the novel are very beautiful, making it smooth and enjoyable to read. The words are just right and can accurately express the emotion the author wants to convey. This novel left me with endless memories and I can feel its charm after reading it many times. The author's writing style is both concise and beautiful, making people forget to leave. At the same time, the storyline in the novel also made me want to put it down. Every plot is full of expectations! O(^o^)o

It looks good and suits my taste. That's why it's discontinued! ! Please update! ! [Cry][cry][cry]

This is a great article, it is the story of the ancient demons saving Blue Star. The perfect blend of technology and mythology is worth watching. The only thing that I think is not good is that there are so few love lines and it feels like there is almost nothing. If you don't mind this, you can really watch it. I highly recommend it! [Send heart][Send heart]

It's really good to read, I finished it in one go [crying], the author please keep updating [love]

It's a very good interstellar novel, both in terms of character creation and plot setting. It's probably because fewer people read it, so the rating is not high. Don't let the cover dissuade you. The main career line of the article is really to my liking. It's a bit of a group portrait, but it's very suitable for this plot. Every supporting character is very cute, and the relationship between the big demons is really warm and beautiful. Although they are bad friends with each other, that is why they are like a big family. The whole text has a major main line, and the plot also revolves around this. The two protagonists both work hard for the people of each other's world, and they love Max a lot. There is little written about the emotional lines of the protagonists, but they are very delicate. You can see the sympathy between the two people for each other between the lines. The ending is open-ended, giving me the feeling that this world will continue to run forever. The subsequent stories and lives of the two protagonists are also long and beautiful.