Transmigrating into the World of Films and TV, Starting with Ashes of Love

From the beginning of reading this book, I felt that it was very plain and not very interesting, and the heroine appeared too little, especially in the first world. Maybe the author wanted to write about film and television, and just wanted to make up for the regretful parts of the play. But the author also forgot that this book is based on the heroine Chen Yuanlin. The protagonist does not appear in as many scenes as the supporting roles, and the protagonist and the supporting role are reversed. Such a result is not what readers want to see. Here are some suggestions for authors: 1. When writing plots, bring in more emotion so that the article doesn't seem like vernacular. 2. I hope that Chen Yuanlin's appearances can increase and she can truly play her role as a heroine. The author also has enough advantages in writing this book. For example, the author has essentially made the bad things in the original plot better, which is also the original intention of this book. The plot is written quickly and is easy to understand, so that readers will not feel that the number of chapters in a world is too long and abandon the text. After reading the comments, I summarized it. Everyone thinks that the most important problem with this novel is that it is too vernacular. The writing style needs to be refined, so the author also needs support.

I like this novel, but I have no love brain

I like to watch movies and TV shows, but the writing and plots are not rich and vivid enough. From an outsider's perspective, it may seem cold and lacking in emotion. I think: I have to put my own true emotions into them, as if they exist in the real world, and the real world will be more fascinating. I hope the author will continue to make further progress! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Come on! Work hard to update the article. (ง ᴛ ʏ ᴛ)งCome on. (ﾉ=>王<=)ﾉ Cute tiger attacks

Great author, please come on [sending heartfelt wishes]

Five-star review first. Let me talk about my feelings about reading the book. The first point is that the heroine has a low sense of presence. I feel that most of the writing is just some descriptions of bystanders. I hope that the heroine has more presence and not be written like a running account, or there is almost no difference from the original drama. The second point is that the name of the heroine is a bit gender-neutral. The situation of separation is not bad, but sometimes it is unclear. Thirdly, I don't think that the heroine is omnipotent or anything, but since you want to change the original ending, don't wait too long. I have been struggling with the villain for a long time. It is clean and crisp. In the end, come on, author ^0＾~

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Females should be more involved

The writing is very good. Xiangmi, Sansheng III, Immortal Sword III, Splendid Weiyang... Make me look forward to Shanhe Ling more and more.

I hope the book will be read by many people