HP: The Little Princess of Slytherin

The author wrote it well. Voldemort turned from a nightmare into an old father and only needed a daughter. This reminded me of the video I watched before, where the flower-armed dad performed in a skirt.

This HP article is the most innovative one I have ever seen. This is my top 2! ! ! The author's writing is super good. Emm, I didn't pay attention to some small details and didn't see any problems, so I don't have any suggestions. I kind of hope that the male protagonist is Cedric Wuwu. The author's writing is also very good. I'm looking forward to whether it will be based on the original work in the future! ? Looking forward to the new plot! Come on, author! ! Give me a reward!

It's okay, although it's really OOC (for example: the gentle Riddle who is a daughter, Gellert who looks very much like Dumbledore, and Snape who is a bit "changeable very quickly". Ron has very few scenes, and some of them are overly described). The heroine is a bit like a heartthrob, but there is not so much ambiguity, she is just beautiful and others have a good impression of her. ! ! When I thought the male protagonist was Draco, it turned out to be Snape. When I finally accepted the teacher-student relationship, Snape died again! ! ! When I thought the male protagonist was going to become Draco again, you told me that the heroine would be alone (that is, with her father, Riddle). I thought that would be the end of it, but in the end, the heroine returned to the original world again🙃Every step of the way was beyond my expectations! It's not particularly eye-catching, but it's enough to pass the time.

So few, alas, I was wrong, I should raise them The writing is very good, the plot is also very good, and the characters are very consistent with the original work. I personally hope that CP is a Sri Lankan religion, and I have some personal thoughts, but doesn't the book also say that Antilia is also interested in Sri Lanka? In addition, the overall pace of this book is slow, so you have to focus on the middle and later stages. Don't forget, you also need to pay attention to polishing the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists, that's all. Finally, I would like to thank you for writing this book. This book should always be on my bookshelf.

It's super good. This is the first time I've watched Voldemort's Daughter. I'm really looking forward to the next plot. Thank you Ollie😁😁😁

The author, the novel is really good, but the update is a bit slow. I hope the author can update it faster. The author writes very well!

The early plot of this novel is really great. The characters of Tom and his daughter are full of color, and they really get more and more interesting the more you read. In the later period, the emotional line of the heroine is more awkward and direct, a bit rough. In the early stage, I thought that Xiaolong and Xiaolong were partners, because there was no mark in the introduction. Tom and Lucius even had such an idea in the book, and described the first time Xiaolong met the heroine. At that time, I really felt that the heroine and Xiaolong were partners. Later, when I was writing about the professor's psychological process, I felt something was wrong. Later, the heroine lost her memory, regained her memory when she woke up, and then fell madly in love with the professor. I thought it was quite explosive at the time, especially because the professor and the heroine were 18 years apart. They can be 10 years old or 8 years old, but they can't be 18 years old. Moreover, before the memory was restored, the heroine did not like the professor very much, and could even be said to be a bit disgusted. After the memory was restored, it became clear (the other heroine said that this is our mother, but she did not understand). I was being silly, but after reading the comments, some people gave up. I saw that there were more than 20 chapters left, and I jumped to the end of it. When the finale was approaching, the heroine felt that her feelings for the professor were not that strong, and that family affection was more important to him. She felt that she didn't care about the professor very much (when they confirmed their relationship earlier, they said something like, have you thought about it, and then later said that he was quite indifferent in terms of feelings). Then the professor fell out, and the heroine felt that she still cared about the professor. She felt that the writing in the later period was a bit sloppy. But to be honest, the author's early writing was really good. I've read too many fanfics, and I'm a little tired of reviewing them. I started reading this novel in the morning, and I was addicted to it. Although the ending didn't have the expected effect, it was also very surprising. Overall, this novel is still worth recommending. If you don't care about the emotional line, you can read it. I gave 4 stars because I attach more importance to the emotional line. Since I have written it, I have to write it well. The emotional line is relatively stiff and awkward. But just looking at the plot, this article is really good. And because it is a four-color character setting, there will be a little deviation. For example, Tom was a bit silly after having a heroine, and he became more and more loving, and finally resurrected Harry's parents.

It's really good! Since the book is so well written, Gryffindor deducts 10,000 points! Slytherin adds 50,000 points! Okay, finally Slytherin wins! [Sneaky laugh]

I really like this book, it's great! I would venture to ask, who is the heroine CP?

The author's writing style is really good. The protagonist's IQ is online. Andrea's weirdness suddenly touched my heart. I love it. It really shouldn't be rated so low [crazy] [crazy] (puzzled) Treasure books shouldn't be discovered by so few people [loving] [loving]