When a Reborn Heroine Meets a Transmigrated Supporting Villainess

This is my favorite Lily. Overall it's not bad, but the content is a bit simple and crude, the span is a bit wide, and some details are missing. If the details are explained clearly, it may make it easier for people to devote themselves to the scene and be immersed in it.

Lily! YYDS! So sweet that it hurts your teeth! [Full] [Full] [Full]

It's really beautiful. The interaction between Qiu Ya and Yan Xingmo is so sweet, and the deputy CP is also so sweet, so sweet. Moreover, the plots are also very complete, there are no pitfalls, so you can feel free to snipe blindly. The author is also very silly, and there are many interesting jokes in it. I guarantee that I will laugh to death after reading it. I have never read an unfinished novel before, except for this one, because it is so good!

Come on, author! For some people who only read a little bit and then directly comment and give some low ratings, you don't need to care about them. Don't take such words at ease, just write well! It's enough to have these little cuties like us~[Send heart][Send heart]

Lily Don't worry about the cookies, you won't lose anything if you get them The writing is delicate and gentle, I believe it will get better and better in the future (✪▽✪) Daily question: Did Sister Qiu lose her character today? Author, when will you see me [crying][crying][crying]

It's beautiful, it's a rare Lily article (￣y▽￣)~*It's just that there are a few updates and it's not enough to read.

How should I put it? The writing is very poor.

It is also essential to highlight the character's form, expression and side profile. I read the first few chapters here, and the character's background and personality are not well explained (the same is true for Teacher Qin. After all, the protagonist is studying in a "high-end" "university". Snobs like this like to find faults and find trouble. A more extreme "teacher" probably won't be hired. Even if he is hired, there will be reasons and backgrounds, which I haven't explained yet.) The heroine's emotional line is not done well, so I can't just skip it. But it's just the beginning, and it's still easy to write, so take your time, come on! ! ! [Learned][Learned]

First of all, the emotional description is really rough, and the overall story also feels like the writing style of an elementary school student, which is mindless and refreshing... Just... Author, your writing is indeed sweet, but this does not mean that the writing style can be ignored. I really haven't read much, so I gave it five stars. Secondly, the author, your writing style... If you know a little about the overall story, you will know everything. If you say it is nice, it will be classic. It's a bit ugly, the story is old-fashioned and not very interesting. I only read a few chapters. If you want to say that the later part is good, then let me ask, the first part is not good. Except for some patient people who will look back, some people will quit directly, and a few people will jump to read it. In this fast food era, if you can't make people's eyes light up from the beginning, half the battle is lost. I don't know what the story is about, but I can probably guess it. Author, don't you really think the story is too cliche? Of course, I'm not saying that the subject matter is not good, but that your plot is very cliche. For example, if the teacher learns that the heroine is going to his class, even if he goes to the theory, he will not talk to the principal in such an arrogant tone, unless it is to experience life. Secondly, even the teacher hates a student. , And you won't go to the principal to make trouble, and the emotional line, it takes a very love-hungry person to fall in love with each other at the first meeting (it is true between friends). Moreover, when I watched the small theater, I said that the heroine was cold. Can you tell me how cold she looked in the few chapters I read? And it's unreasonable for you to be in the infirmary. Two people who have never met each other have only met for a few days, and they stand up in a hurry just because of a joke... It's simply outrageous! Moreover, since ratings are very important to authors, then read more and improve your writing skills, even if it is not for readers or novels, but for yourself. After all, there are not many people like me who can say that the writing is not good but give it a five-star rating, and if the writing is good, I will not worry about writing.

Lily yyds's okay.