Online Game: Rebooting My Esports Era

The setting of this book is still very attractive to me. The psychological activities of the protagonist and the feeling of youth frustration are well described. In addition, I read it relatively late. The word count has exceeded 2 million words, so I don't have to worry about breaking the eunuch. I am currently at the end of the first volume. In the first volume, each character has his or her own characteristics. It is also in line with my imagination of group portrait novels. Some of the funny elements mixed in are not boring. My reaction after reading the first volume is probably to feel sorry for the author. Obviously there are only a few people who have read it with such high quality, so I came here to quickly rate it. I wish the author this and the next book will get better and better! Come on!

It is indeed well written, with the feeling of Ye Zi. In fact, the plot of the dungeon is better than that of Ye Zi. The Moon Lake dungeon is a good example. It is rare to have such a good work when online game writing is not popular nowadays. I would like to give some suggestions to the author. There are too many dialogues, especially those of Haozi, which are often skipped, which affects reading. In addition, the data is not clear, the equipment and characters, and the skills of the warlock in the early stage are very unclear. Although you will have to switch back to the light swordsman later, the first two hundred chapters are all warlock professions after all. In the end, I hope the author can keep writing and the work will get better and better.

I just read more than 100 chapters, so I can briefly describe my feelings. Let's talk about the advantages first. The author's writing style is good, and the copy is also well designed. It looks very comfortable. Moreover, there are no unbalanced things like SSS talents or exclusive artifacts at the beginning, so as to give people the pleasure of slowly growing. The other comments in the comprehensive comment area (I can tell the difference between a real person and a computer) should be a classic online game novel worth reading. But there are also some dissatisfactions. The first is the plot of the warlock stage. I understand the author's intention in arranging it, but it is a bit too long. It wants to be promoted but suppressed for too long. The author wants to reflect the growth of the protagonist's character, but there are too many descriptions of the protagonist's indecisiveness and escaping from reality, which leads to the reader's first feeling not of growth, but of disgust. Also, I personally prefer rigorous data-based online games. But this book is pretty good for its rigor, but the data is a little lacking. You don't know the detailed attributes when you get equipment, you don't know the detailed multiplier when you get skills, you don't know how much blood you lose when fighting monsters. Although it is better to have no data than chaotic or corrupted data, I have read too many classic online game articles by great masters, and my taste has developed. In summary, it's worth watching. Suitable for slow viewing.

The writing is really good, maybe the warlock part in the early part is a bit boring, but the further it gets, the better it gets. Whether it's the emotional line that makes me envious, or the ability to make so many lovely and reliable friends, maybe these are the most precious things in life. The pace is very slow, but it's really good. I spent a few days reading during the day and listening to the book at night, and I just finished the updated parts of the whole book. I feel confused and disappointed when I see that the rest of the book is not finished. I hope it can be updated soon. I'm really looking forward to it. Come on, come on. I don't know how many times I've logged in. I still want to see the follow-up, but it's probably gone [crying]

The writing style is good, and the writing power is one of the best in Tomato. Although it is said to be in the first person, it actually looks very smooth, and thanks to the combination of the author's writing style and the characteristics of the first person, there will be a good sense of substitution, which is a rare thing recently. The plot is slow and group-based, the characters are not all the same, and it has a good sense of daily life. The protagonist is not a traditional holy lord, nor is he the current murderous lord. He is a character that is closer to reality. If you like to read simple and fast-paced novels, it is not recommended. After all, there are not many writers of this type in recent years. If you can accept this type of writing that requires more detailed reading, this book will give you a relatively good experience. In terms of online games, it can be seen that the author's professionalism is very low. The data and skills... Are relatively difficult to describe. For example, the mimicry skill is an obvious supermodel skill. Many skills and props do not have their data clearly stated when introducing them, making them look supermodel or unclear in strength. In terms of tactics, that sentence is still not professional enough. It is recommended not to delve into this part of the content (after all, these are more biased toward the preferences of data flow readers. It is difficult to write this kind of thing perfectly and accurately) Then, the author feels like someone who writes dozens of minutes for several hours of class. Some parts of the writing are confusing, and a small part of the setting is not rigorous. Many things are written directly without introduction, which may make people confused at first glance. Maybe he wants to make the text look smoother, but it still has a small impact (but it does not affect reading) Overall, as an old book, if you don't judge it from a relatively more radical perspective now, it is indeed a very good book, plus it is really ~~~~~~~~~ long! Everyone should understand the joy of being able to watch for a long time without being interrupted~ Highly recommended! But when I see the author making minor mistakes, he is a little more relaxed~

Online games, e-sports, and emotional processing are all very good. As for online games, most of the content is innovative and not cliché. The e-sports descriptions have the flavor of a full-time master. Although the emotional descriptions of Wang Mufeng are not particularly outstanding, they also embellish the article. Maybe the warlock in the first half was a little uncomfortable, but after picking up the light sword again, it felt exciting again. The only shortcoming (maybe not a shortcoming) may be that there are many full-time masters, but this is almost inevitable in online game e-sports articles nowadays. This book is definitely better than most online game articles on Tomato. I don't understand why the rating is so low. And I saw the author's love for online games and online game articles. It may be difficult to make any money from this book, but his love supports him to keep writing. I like this book very much and want to see it finished, so I wrote this paragraph to tell the author that there are always people supporting him.

The book is very nice and the content in the game is very creative. There are 18 professions. I admire the author's imagination [laughing and crying]. There are also many funny dialogues and plots in the book. It is full of passion and humor, which makes people want to read it in one sitting. The description of the battle is hearty and hearty, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is gradually deepening (there shouldn't be any outrageous emotional entanglements in online game novels, right?). In short, the book is very good, good luck to the author!

The characters are vividly portrayed and the story is exciting. I highly recommend it and give it a five-star rating.

It was my first time to read an online game novel, and I was very lucky to choose this one. I started watching videos and saw the full-time master, and suddenly I wanted to read an online game novel, so I searched for it. I couldn't find anything I wanted to read for a long time, and it was so bad. I accidentally saw this book on a recommendation. The content was really slow at the beginning, but the fact that Zhu Zi might regain the light sword made me keep reading, and I got to know Feng Feng later ( Personally, I still like to read novels with female protagonists, because the simple plot advancement is too boring, and the emotional line is definitely the spice of the plot, which is indispensable! It is like the intermission after boxing, which cannot be left out. Of course, there should be no more female protagonists. It is very annoying to see one falling in love with each other! ) The first person is really weird at first, but it doesn't feel like it anymore. Then speaking of my favorite plot, it has to be Fengfeng's first appearance. I really like the subsequent seven parts of the plot, which made it easy for me to get involved. Fengfeng's distress signal to Zhuzi, Zhuzi's self-righteousness, Fengfeng's despair that Zhuzi did not invite her to form a team (under the strong methods of her mother, the only one who can rely on The person I relied on, but like my mother, made a decision for myself without permission) This feeling of despair is very real. I gave up the struggle at that moment. Now thinking about it, my chest is still tight, but the ending is good. Zhuzi took the step that many people took. At that moment, I was more anxious than Zhuzi, thinking that I must be faster, phew~ Our Brother Hui is also very awesome, hahahahaha. I don't have much else to say except for typos, which are harmless. Overall, I like it very much! Must give five stars! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ @ Gu Nai

Very nice! ! This is the first time I read this kind of online game e-sports article, and I feel that it gets better and better as you go to the end. I especially like the plot of professional competitions in the later stages. Every game is exciting, and it is not just the protagonist who is showing off. Basically, everyone in the Fuchen team has their own highlights. The single female protagonist is a plus point for me, and the emotional scenes between Zhuzi and Fengfeng are also very natural, slightly undercut but still high in sugar content. (Actually, I quite like microblading, as long as it's he [shy]) I don't know how to praise it, but I really like this book! ! (It's almost over and I can't bear to leave it [crying])