Dragon Ball: Shackles of Life

It's okay, but when I first read the author's description, he planned to have no heroine, and he originally planned to abandon it. However, the plot, story, and characters were described very delicately, so I endured it and read it. Fortunately, later on, the protagonist's daughter Qiangwei came out, and I found out that the protagonist has wife No. 18, So I will continue to watch. Give a five-star review to support the author!

Okay, hold on, keep up the good work and update, as long as it doesn't collapse, it will be a masterpiece. By the way, I would like to give some suggestions. Some of them can be written more. For example, when you were drinking on the night before the wedding, don't be afraid of ruining your character. Someone will definitely like it. Of course, you can't ruin it too hard. There is also the playing and singing of the wedding part. It would be good to write about Wu Ling's psychological activities and other people's psychological activities. It would be good to have a little bit of daily life. Finally, I look forward to the strong promotion of Wu Ling on the 18th [get it]

The overall story is full, the characters have distinct personalities, and the emotional portrayal is also very delicate. Moreover, I really like that the protagonist does not destroy the family structure of important characters that will affect the story line. Big boost for the author!

The writing is still very good. The author has written about all the changes in time and space caused by the protagonist's time travel. Unlike other Dragon Ball fans, they have super awesome abilities but have no impact on the main time and space at all. Completely like a spectator. Come on author!

My reading hours, I guess it's two hours The back part isn't that good, I can't watch it anyway

I feel it is better than most Dragon Ball fics, and I also like the heroine [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

22 Hours. This includes eating and sleeping. I finished brushing it. What can I say about this book? It's very bad, the updates are too slow, and the author is too short. I hope everyone will jump in quickly.

It's a very exciting novel. I feel that only the part about Namek, the part about Bidili, and the protagonist's soaring combat power are a bit abrupt. It becomes more and more exciting later on. What's more, I think the best thing is that the time travel is explained perfectly, and Trunks' time travel back is also done very well. I give it a thumbs up.

This book is very well written. First of all, the foreshadowing of Rose's time traveling through time at the beginning made me look forward to the author's conclusion. The writing is perfect, I agree with the last book review👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 This is the best fanfic I've ever seen

It's quite good to watch, the plot is very good, and it's different from other ordinary invincible novels.

One of the few Dragon Ball fans who can watch it, they are purely earthly, have no system, do not make wishes, and rely entirely on their own exploration and breakthrough. This setting is very interesting! The details, foreshadowing, and foreshadowing are handled very well. The author is very humane and makes up for all the regrets left by the original work! This is great👍🏻It looks pretty good in daily life. The description of love is so bad, but it's still okay! It doesn't have much poison, the only shortcoming is - just like the original comic, its combat power is so low that it flies up!

It's very well written. The dog food is quite delicious, but the quantity is a bit small and not filling enough. I wish I could have more. As for the sweetness, I have to say it's really on point. Well, that's it, I can only say it's a very good book. Although it is a bit boring in the early stage, it starts to be very good in the middle.

It's been a long time since I've had a non-system protagonist from Earth, and it's well written.

I personally prefer to read cool books. This book may not be good for me because the protagonist died when fighting Frieza and couldn't defeat Cell. After that, he has to rely on others, just like the thousand-year-old second brother. So I don't like it very much. But if you like teamwork, this book is good.

In fact, the book written by the author is quite good. It is better than most Dragon Ball articles and it is written logically. Mainly because Dragon Ball itself is an article with no logic. It is good that it can be written like this. Finished after not watching it for a while. [Laughing awkwardly]

Yes, there aren't many Tomatoes writing about Dragon Ball. Although there are some poisonous points, I have also read a lot of Dragon Ball fanfics. This one is quite good, and it doesn't blindly follow the plot of the original work. Come on, author! [Like] [Like] [Like]

6666666666666666666666666666666666[Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][ Cool] [Cool] Author, come on, although this book has many shortcomings, it is still better-looking than those systems on the whole. It is just that the male protagonist feels that he has grown up a bit fast. It would be better if it was synthesized a little more. Author, come on. Although this book has many shortcomings, it is still better-looking than those systems on the whole. It is just that the male protagonist feels that he has grown up a little too fast. It would be better if it was synthesized a little more.

The writing is good, although it is not exciting or passionate, nor is it a systematic flow, but the character setting and plot are very good, with pitfalls and pitfalls, and the character's personality is very good and he persisted until the end. It is a rare good work. I hope the author will have more good books. There are very few good authors. At least I think you are a very good author.

Although the author's writing skills have some flaws, both the imagination and the conception are quite good, and the three views are also in line with the three views of normal people. Except for the emotional scene, which is a little bit abrupt, all other aspects are quite good. Five-star praise supports it.

It's the best Dragon Ball novel I've ever read (personal feeling) [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying] Can the author write more Dragon Ball novels? [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

Zhebensg This book is not bad. How come it is only 8.7? Although some aspects of the original series are not handled well, but relatively speaking, it is a relatively good fan novel that I have read.

It's very beautiful, and the most important thing is that it has a single female protagonist. The characters are also well drawn. I hope the author is writing a Dragon Ball. Ninety-nine percent of the time, Dragon Ball can't stand it anymore. It either takes a woman into the harem when it sees a woman, or it's the brother of Sun Wukong who only uses Sun Wukong at all times and has no family affection at all. This is the only Dragon Ball I like.

It's really great. To be honest, I haven't seen such a good book in a long time. There is no messy system, the combat power is gradually and steadily improved, and the emotions are also described very delicately. It makes me feel like I am reading Dragon Ball again.

This can be regarded as the real mortal flow in the history of Dragon Ball. When I first saw this drawing of Qi into the body, it felt a bit like cultivating immortals! But it really gives me a very attractive feeling. The ones I watched before were either Super Saiyans or the legendary Super Saiyans. They are good, good, and must be five stars.

The best Dragon Ball fanfic I have ever seen, please give it a thumbs up! [Like][Like][Like]

I'm not bragging, I've read it all, I haven't skipped a chapter, it's okay, everything is okay, but it's a bit short, the rest is okay, the ending makes me wonder if it will be a highlight of the next book.

Not brainless, not a stallion, with normal outlook on life, pretty good-looking and a purebred earthling [crying] I love it so much, I just don't like a bunch of aliens destroying the earth all the time [like]

This is one of the best Dragon Ball fanfics I have ever read. . I have also thought about the vitality bomb technique before, whether it is possible to inhale the vitality bomb into the body. I didn't expect anyone to actually write this.

Very good, five-star praise! There is no system, just rely on your own efforts to become stronger [Like] It's just too short, author, keep up the good work! And I have to be with No. 18, Hehe, I like it.

Very exciting, different content, compared to the ones I watched that were either super-transformed or with a heaven-defying system when they were born. The protagonist is just like a spectator in the Dragon Ball world. To be honest, those ones were very boring, but this different content is better. There is no system, no blood, just ordinary earthling blood. You can do everything on your own.