The Black Lotus Male Lead Keeps Trying to Win Me Over

[Sending Hearts] Shamelessly give yourself a five-point score

Ahhhhhh, I finished reading it in one morning, it's not enough. The relationship between Xie Yun and Lin Yi is completely natural. Where is the black lotus? This is obviously our little cutie. Junior brother, you are too cruel to kill me.

I can't hold it back, and I haven't finished reading it yet, but it's almost 20 chapters away. I gave it five points because the author's writing style is very good and the writing style is also very witty. But when it comes to the plot, I can't say enough about it. By the way, I think the male and female protagonists are more love-minded. I read it carefully and understood it, but I still think the emotional development of the male and female protagonists is too blunt, and in fact, the male protagonist is too emotional. The main character's presence is not strong, and of course it can be viewed as a coming-of-age story with a single heroine. That's how I view it. One thing to say is that the character of the heroine is actually not lovable, but she is indeed just an ordinary person at the beginning. The setting is actually reasonable and understandable, but in the end the heroine is too drifting with the crowd, and she does feel like she is being pushed. To be honest I really hate this feeling. It may be related to my personality and I never like to be passive. Although the heroine has had a hard time along the way and has witnessed her growth with my own eyes, for Xie Yun, I always feel that she is still a little bit behind. But maybe for the author, this is the best arrangement the author has given them. If there is still something missing, I will insist on finishing it. I will finish reading it. It's a newcomer's work. The author needs to work harder. I really agree with the author's writing. She actually deserves a five-point rating, but for this story, it is far from meeting such expectations. But everyone has different preferences and the rating should be more objective, but I want to give the author this five-point subjectively. This article may not be to my liking, but such excellent writing should not be buried. This review is true, I still can't help but say it! It sucks! There are a lot of holes that have not been filled in. Although the ending is good, it is not explained clearly. My poor couple Lin Zhi and Xuan Nu are just like this. The ending is more or less hasty. By the way, the author does not have an outline to let himself go. In fact, the later plot has nothing to do with the introduction.

I hope that the male protagonist can change the nickname for his senior sister in the future, because I don't call him sister for the next year, and my mind is a bit wild. This book is in line with my taste. I really like this book. This is the first time I have written a review and scored a novel since I read it on Tomato. I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on, and present better works to readers!

A very wonderful book, the heroine is well portrayed!

I really like the setting of this book! The heroine travels into the novel and starts tasks one after another. Each task is a short story, and the heroine is also growing step by step. The female protagonist is cold-hearted but also a foodie, while the male protagonist looks pitiful but is actually a sinister person. Not to be missed!

I watched Xie Yun grow up slowly. She had love, friendship, teacher-student relationship in this strange world. She had a bond in this world, so she worked hard to shoulder the very heavy responsibility and protect the Xiulan World. From the beginning when she had nothing to do with herself to later becoming the number one sword cultivator with the world in mind, she has experienced a lot and grown a lot.

I really like this book. When I first read it, I thought it was going to collapse. After reading it slowly, it became really fascinating. I hope you can follow your own ideas. Come on (´-ω-`)

It's pretty good... Many books written in very simple terms are read by many people. This one is pretty well written, but the traffic is low... Tomato is so confusing.

At first, I always thought that the male protagonist was the master... When I saw the female protagonist and the junior brother together, I was still thinking... Would the junior brother hiccup..., Ahhhhh