Starting from Prototype

The author of this book is quite high-level. Generally speaking, it is not about fighting and killing. But for now, it can be roughly divided into personal growth before the end of Marvel and world integration after Marvel. Xiao He succeeds and Xiao He fails. The good part is that the author himself is not bad in experience and his writing style continues to improve, and he is able to master the more complex world integration methods instead of brainless killing. The shortcomings are naturally the lack of brainless killing, combat power display, and high burning point.

I have only listened to 14 of them. The 14 that I have listened to so far tell the story from a third perspective about the dialogue between the protagonist and people in the Marvel world. There are relatively few of them, and more often they are like some simulator books 😫 I think the protagonist can be allowed to go to other worlds in the Marvel world when not involved in the plot, such as Xialan, Pacific Rim, Godzilla vs. King Kong, Quiba, and other worlds with giant or vicious beasts. The world's combat power is not too strong.

Well written, keep it up! Be more diligent in your daily writing. The human nature is portrayed in a deeper way. I didn't want to watch Soul Crossing after I saw it. I hope Resident Evil Master will gain something and go back to fuse. Remember to call me.

Overall it's pretty good, but the early plot of the torture and murder prototype was a bit too hasty and not explained clearly. The article was not well polished and looked a bit empty and dry. The torture prototype plot has a lot of space for creation, which is equivalent to a free world without many plots. In fact, it can be written better. After that, the Marvel plot is much better. This is because there are many Marvel settings, but you can only follow the plot. You can't break away from the original Marvel settings, but it is also more vivid. You can clearly feel the author's gradual progress in the article, but there is also a lot of room for improvement. Come on, come on.

The narrative is concise and clear, without so many watery plots. There is a lot to say, so first give the author an inspiration capsule to recharge. Comment after reading it.

The world of Blacklight Virus is nice to watch, but it's not interesting to travel through Marvel. It might as well be written in the interstellar era. After all, pig's feet are virus aggregates, and time has no meaning to pig's feet. It's completely possible to develop technology, go to alien planets and create an ecology filled with viruses, and play a magical medieval game, such as dragons, elves and the tree of life, dwarves and humans, magic and fighting spirit, etc.

Normally I would give it one star, but it's free, so it doesn't matter how many more stars I give, but I can't mislead others like in the comment section, so I give it one less star. First of all, who said writing has become better! Later progress? I endured my temper and looked down to see where it was better! Just go to the last few chapters and you will see that there is progress, but even after the progress is made, it is still barely up to the level of a normal online novel! There is no such thing as good writing. The details are not appropriate, especially in the beginning. I don't know if it's because I'm older or because I don't have enough sense of immersion in the book to foreshadow and shape it well. I want to laugh when the protagonist mentions his plan. So embarrassing. There is no feeling of great wisdom and foolishness, but there is a feeling of great foolishness and wisdom [Petrified] Especially when I see there are weakening links at the end... This plot is extremely poisonous. After the first ten chapters of the plot, it started to feel more and more like playing house and suppressing the protagonist, which seemed boring. Just like when I asked AI to play cyber house for me before, it was set that I had reached the full level and defeated the boss. AI also wrote that I had encountered a strong enemy - the mobs in Novice Village! Where can I write like this? Foreshadowing, rendering, shaping, and contrasting, various methods are used to construct a world view, a plot, and a story of ups and downs. This is a novel, not a diary based on a running account. There is no sense of progress from level to level, and the plot has no sense of story, which is boring. All I can say is that the author is really awesome for being able to insist on writing two million words. After all, it is free, and the author has not made any profit. It shines for love, and I really admire it. This perseverance is really awesome. Shortcomings exist objectively, and it is recommended to think about how to improve them. I really want to read a good black light novel, but I love it so much that I can only comment angrily. I really hope the author can write well! Not like this now! But I am not a professional author, the above is just my personal feeling. And it seems that there has been no update for several days. Should the update be discontinued? 🤦

It doesn't take into account what the readers want to see at all. Even if it ignores all the important points, it still goes its own way. At first glance, it seems that the author is driven by interest. However, it is obvious that the writing power is getting stronger later and he is much better than me in persisting in this aspect. Give it a five-star support. I believe the next one will be better.

It's still very good, not too invincible, and has expanded the world view. I didn't waste time on the original protagonist. Modern technology is almost there, and then there is the black technology. I can continue to work hard in the world of martial arts or superpowers [Chigua] (The author himself is also very active in the comments)

It's not bad, but it's a rare fanfic of the original form of killing.