Starting from the Original Form of Murder

The author of this book is quite high-level. Generally speaking, it is not about fighting and killing. But for now, it can be roughly divided into personal growth before the end of Marvel and world integration after Marvel. Xiao He succeeds and Xiao He fails. The good part is that the author himself is not bad in experience and his writing style continues to improve, and he is able to master the more complex world integration methods instead of brainless killing. The shortcomings are naturally the lack of brainless killing, combat power display, and high burning point.

I have only listened to 14 of them. The 14 that I have listened to so far tell the story from a third perspective about the dialogue between the protagonist and people in the Marvel world. There are relatively few of them, and more often they are like some simulator books [crazy] I think the protagonist can be allowed to go to other worlds in the Marvel world when not involved in the plot, such as Xialan, Pacific Rim, Godzilla vs. King Kong, Quiba, and other worlds with giant or vicious beasts. The world's combat power is not too strong.

Well written, keep it up! Be more diligent in your daily writing. The human nature is portrayed in a deeper way. I didn't want to watch Soul Crossing after I saw it. I hope Resident Evil Master will gain something and go back to fuse. Remember to call me.

Overall it's pretty good, but the early plot of the torture and murder prototype was a bit too hasty and not explained clearly. The article was not well polished and looked a bit empty and dry. The torture prototype plot has a lot of space for creation, which is equivalent to a free world without many plots. In fact, it can be written better. After that, the Marvel plot is much better. This is because there are many Marvel settings, but you can only follow the plot. You can't break away from the original Marvel settings, but it is also more vivid. You can clearly feel the author's gradual progress in the article, but there is also a lot of room for improvement. Come on, come on.

The narrative is concise and clear, without so many watery plots. There is a lot to say, so first give the author an inspiration capsule to recharge. Comment after reading it.

The world of Blacklight Virus is nice to watch, but it's not interesting to travel through Marvel. It might as well be written in the interstellar era. After all, pig's feet are virus aggregates, and time has no meaning to pig's feet. It's completely possible to develop technology, go to alien planets and create an ecology filled with viruses, and play a magical medieval game, such as dragons, elves and the tree of life, dwarves and humans, magic and fighting spirit, etc.

It's still very good, not too invincible, and has expanded the world view. I didn't waste time on the original protagonist. Modern technology is almost there, and then there is the black technology. I can continue to work hard in the world of martial arts or superpowers [Chigua] (The author himself is also very active in the comments)

It's not bad, but it's a rare fanfic of the original form of killing.

Normally I would give it one star, but it's free, so it doesn't matter how many more stars I give, but I can't mislead others like in the comment section, so I give it one less star. First of all, who said writing has become better! Later progress? I endured my temper and looked down to see where it was better! Just go to the last few chapters and you will see that there is progress, but even after the progress is made, it is still barely up to the level of a normal online novel! There is no such thing as good writing. The details are not appropriate, especially in the beginning. I don't know if it's because I'm older or because I don't have enough sense of immersion in the book to foreshadow and shape it well. I want to laugh when the protagonist mentions his plan. So embarrassing. There is no feeling of great wisdom and foolishness, but there is a feeling of great foolishness and wisdom [Petrified] Especially when I see there are weakening links at the end... This plot is extremely poisonous. After the first ten chapters of the plot, it started to feel more and more like playing house and suppressing the protagonist, which seemed boring. Just like when I asked AI to play cyber house for me before, it was set that I had reached the full level and defeated the boss. AI also wrote that I had encountered a strong enemy - the mobs in Novice Village! Where can I write like this? Foreshadowing, rendering, shaping, and contrasting, various methods are used to construct a world view, a plot, and a story of ups and downs. This is a novel, not a diary based on a running account. There is no sense of progress from level to level, and the plot has no sense of story, which is boring. All I can say is that the author is really awesome for being able to insist on writing two million words. After all, it is free, and the author has not made any profit. It shines for love, and I really admire it. This perseverance is really awesome. Shortcomings exist objectively, and it is recommended to think about how to improve them. I really want to read a good black light novel, but I love it so much that I can only comment angrily. I really hope the author can write well! Not like this now! But I am not a professional author, the above is just my personal feeling. And it seems that there has been no update for several days. Should the update be discontinued? [Cover face]

Overall, it's not bad, and it's okay to read during a book shortage. But there are some parts that don't stand up to scrutiny. I wonder if the author will read it himself? If you read it again after writing it yourself, this problem may not occur. Also, when transitioning, you can do it more naturally and not be so stiff. Overall, it's pretty good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and create greater glories!

It doesn't take into account what the readers want to see at all. Even if it ignores all the important points, it still goes its own way. At first glance, it seems that the author is driven by interest. However, it is obvious that the writing power is getting stronger later and he is much better than me in persisting in this aspect. Give it a five-star support. I believe the next one will be better.

It looks good, it would be great if Brother Corpse could be added.

Looks good, looks good, come on! [Code to live][code to live][code to live]

It's been three years and it's still steaming. How many years has Mercer been here [covering face]

I haven't really enjoyed watching the Marvel world since, so I'll see you again.

The writing may not be very good, but the author loves Black Light and this book very much. It is still being updated. Judging from the income of Tomato, it is completely powered by love. For this, I can only give it a five-star rating. Come on author! Five stars come on!

I don't know what other people think, but I think it looks good. Technology, biology, weapons, IQ, there is no such thing as a cowardly character or anything like that, the character is quite good, anyway I think it is pretty good and pretty good-looking.

After reading Chapter 22, personally, I don't think it's necessary to add Gwen to this kind of story. I think it's enough for the protagonist and his subordinates to become stronger. So far I can still watch it. Give it four stars and try to improve your rating.

It's a very nice book [Chigua], 5⭐️ is enough [Chigua], but there are so few people reading it [Pause face] [Pause face] [Pause face], alas, the author doesn't even update anymore [Pause face]

It sounds good to me, but the author updated it. . . . . . , It's too out of the ordinary, it took me a few days to update a chapter. . . . . . , I think the author's writing is still very good, I hope the author will publish all the manuscripts [Like] When I updated Pacific Rim, I didn't finish reading it, so I decided to keep reading and listen to it. Then the author updated it every ten days or so, and I kept reading until I went to vocational school, and only updated 10 chapters. Follow-up, I haven't read more than 30 chapters after two weeks of reading. The author started to update again. A miracle happened. Don't worry, author, as long as I am still alive, I will definitely finish reading this.

Very good. It's a book I've read. I haven't read a lot of it yet, but it's really good. Read it. I hope it won't break down in the future. Author: I thought Marvel was pretty good before, but the plot of Marvel always felt weird to me. Yes, it just felt like the protagonist seemed to be treading water. Remind me after the plot of Marvel is over.

It was fine before Marvel, but I feel that the protagonist after Marvel is not strong enough; Goldfinger is not enough. I hope that the protagonist can quickly go to the world of Hakoba and obtain the 'Final Trial Status of Humanity' before traveling to other worlds.

It looks great. There are dozens of chapters in the middle where the plot is about soul traveling, but later on it is directly about body traveling. Just skip those dozens of chapters and it will not affect the overall plot.

This game is no longer available

Really good… It's just that the previous one is completely a narrative…[awkward laughter]

Now I'm only halfway through it, here in The Matrix. I don't know if there will be a NieR Automata world in the future. From the Dragon's Back Trilogy to NieR Automata, humans have become extinct, and the Yorha Force has always thought that there are still humans in stock.

How to say it? This book is definitely not the best-looking among the novels I have read, but it is extremely readable. It doesn't make me feel amazing or boring. Personally, I think it's pretty good.

Black light virus is invincible

Brainstorming is a good thing

There are a lot of excessive modifications in some places, which makes the reading feel like AI that likes to use idioms. Of course, I don't mean to say anything bad. It may be due to personal reasons. Overall, it is a very good book.