Another World: Even as a Grim Reaper, I Can Shake the World

The following only represents my personal opinion and is for reference only. If you don't like it, don't insult it. Thank you. Poison points: 1. There is no scene written at the beginning, and the dialogue is unclear. It is not clear which part is dialogue and which part is narration. 2. After reading three chapters, I don't know which ones are happening now and which ones are memories. It's hard to imagine. 3. The story does not match the title of the book. The title of the book is supernatural and it is indeed about anti-drugs. (Don't mention that I have only read three chapters. Readers who cannot understand the first three chapters will not read the following chapters). 4. What is the meaning of merging after death? So whose mind controls the body after death? What is the meaning of secondary development, where an old man becomes a young man and an old woman becomes a young woman? Suggestions: 1. I wrote about the supernatural world at the beginning. To recall, I only need to write about what happened before my death, and what happened after that. 2. It's easy to mess up if you write too much about the opening. You are the author and have imagined the plot in your mind before writing, but readers need to read your words before imagining it. For example, what you wrote is ten points, but readers can only imagine five points of the plot or even lower. 3. Only 3 to 5 characters can appear at most at the start, including the protagonist, the main culprit who killed the protagonist, people encountered in the supernatural world, 4. Clearly write down something that supports the protagonist's survival or can subvert the world, which is the protagonist's "golden finger"

The story is compact and there is no trace of water. The protagonist's character is stable, and the supporting characters also have distinct personalities, which are refreshing but not too intellectual.