[A chaotic start + slow pacing + a huge cast of protagonists and supporting characters + the story doesn’t revolve solely around the protagonist + a fantasy premise dressed up as a transmigration-and-supernatural story + the first three chapters were forcibly extracted to pass review, resulting in a muddled plot + the title is an awkward imitation that doesn’t match the actual story + every possible pitfall has been hit + written with care + abruptly cut short]
The protagonist is named Ze An Zhi. His identity is classified.
More than a dozen recurring supporting characters appear one after another. Their identities are classified too.
The story involves the immortal, yang, and yin realms in a parallel space, but that’s only the beginning.
The other world is vast, so these people need a chance to make their mark in it. There should be some thrills, too.
Trial-takers and exiles from Earth also appear in this world. The protagonist’s number is 94555.
The main plot is classified as well, but most of the time he’s dodging schemes, keeping his head down to survive and grow stronger, and securing benefits for his companions.
As for the System, you can ignore it. Everyone has one, though his is a little different.
Because the book is both toxic and plagued by pitfalls, its debut chapter completion rate was 0.18, the lowest across all of Tomato Novel.
But no matter what, I can’t give up. The characters I’ve written are like my own children.
You can scold a child for disobedience, and you can smack them when they’re being naughty. But I can’t bring myself to kill them just because they’re ugly.
So whether anyone reads it or not, I’ll keep telling the story to the end. I’ll give it a proper beginning and end, and let these kids live to the age they’re meant to reach.
Keep it up!
The following represents only my personal opinion and is for reference only. Please refrain from criticism if you disagree. Points of contention: 1. The opening lacks a clear setting, and the dialogue is unclear, making it difficult to distinguish between dialogue and narration. 2.
The story is fast-paced and concise. The main character is well-developed, the supporting characters are also distinct, there are exciting moments, and it doesn't feel silly.