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Let me emphasize that the male protagonist of this book is Sri Lanka. Now the protagonists have just entered school. Although they are pseudo-children, they still look like toddlers, so the emotional scenes must be at least after the third grade. You can still find something to enjoy between the lines in the previous words. I'm very happy to see you urging the update. I want to create a very good heroine. People in the book will love her, and you will love her for it, so every plot needs to be polished carefully. For example, I changed Chapter 23 many times. Four thousand words will be updated every day. I will add more if I am inspired to write more (gu...). Finally, thank you very much for your love, hmm [blowing kiss]. Quietly give yourself a five-star rating [cool]

I really like this setting and love the heroine, but why is she like that in her heart? (☍⁰) I hope the professor can make the heroine really come alive. The author loves you ꒰づ≧ω≦ づ꒱～♡ I like this article very much. This is my first time to write a review. ฅ՞•ﻌ•՞ฅThe charm of the heroine: strong in the bones, educated in words and deeds, tolerant in relationships, and kind in the heart. Keep writing (•̀ᴗ•́)و ̑̑

That is to say, the whole love letter in a dream belongs to the heroine setting and it is really hard not to love it. Mature but not obtrusive. The tone of each sentence is well grasped. The concept of the meeting has both advantages and disadvantages, so it is more real. It's idealistic but makes everyone yearn for it. I think it's well written. There are very few redundant words and redundant words in the sentences. The detailed description of the heroine does not seem awkward at all and does not force the halo of the protagonist. When reading, you will feel the softness of the moonlight and the charm of the heroine. It can be seen that the author's writing style is well-founded. I rarely read the early foreshadowing stories, but the plot development of this book is also very suitable to my liking. I hope that the description of the relationship with Sif will be detailed and natural. I am very much looking forward to it at the moment. That's all I can think of about book reviews, and I may publish more in the future. In addition, the author should put the description of the character's expressions and actions before and during the speech behind what the character says. It may be a bit confusing at first, but you can quickly react and adapt. 5.21: The heroine is worthy of being Grindelwald's daughter. The chapter that confuses Bella is amazing. It's rare to see this kind of heroine's character and the description is very accurate. I also sincerely hope that our little moon can also have its own light and truly love herself.

My favorite HP fanfic, bar none! [I learned that] the article is very logical, it is a cycle, a closed loop, and complete. The image of the protagonist is also very well created, including Anna's calmness before dying, the tangle of Sijiao in the first half, etc., Which are all very three-dimensional. My GGAD dream has come true! [Laughs] [Laughs] This is the first time I have seen the two parallel worlds in the extra story. It is both funny and redemptive, and it gives everyone a sense of perfection. Highly recommended! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Hold high the GGAD banner! The personality charm of the heroine is well described, making people feel that she is indeed the daughter of Grindelwald and Dumbledore. Although the relationship with the professor is just a friendship now, it is still very interesting ~ I look forward to its future development.

Very good subject matter, the plot is really exciting! Overthrow the concept of pure blood. There is no difference between those who insist on being aloof and ordinary people. Why should they be divided into three, six or nine levels? These ideas are just to put others down and make themselves appear more superior. The author's words are really burning! ! ! ! Love it!

The writing is so good, so perfect, so touching [crying] Although I really want to know some more detailed plots of Dawn Islands, but the author is right, that would deviate a little from the original content of the story, which is good. Dumbledore and Grindelwald were able to let go of the past and retire together so happily [crying] The relationship with Snape really came naturally without any discomfort. Snape's life was too bitter. Anna saved him and pulled him out of the darkness and pain in his new life. Then Snape did not hesitate to cling to Lily, let go of the past calmly, bravely faced his feelings, and gave his sincerity to Anna without reservation. This book did not leave any regrets. Anna did it perfectly! One hundred points for Slytherin!

It's really good and more unique than any Harry Potter fanfic I've seen. My Fate Albus and Grindelwald "The roses in Godric's Hollow only bloom for two months, and there is no summer in Nurmengard surrounded by snowy mountains."

This is the most beautiful Sijiao fanfic I have ever read. This book makes me feel that the love between Anna and Sif is real. Although Sijiao is reborn with memories, it is very reasonable for him to let go of his feelings for Lily. There is no unreasonable heroine aura in the relationship between Anna and Sif. Sif was attracted by Anna's personality charm during their long companionship. The characterization is also very three-dimensional, and the characters in the book are not OOC. But I think there may be some glorification of Old Bee (I don't mean to say anything bad about the principal, but in my opinion, Albus is indeed not as harmless as in the book. At that time, Albus's words to Dumbledore, "Where is my soul?" Really made me remember it for a long time, and I can't forget it now. It has always been brooding, but I understand and recognize Old Bee. After all, I can't think of a better solution, but I still feel sorry for him.) All in all, all in all, this is a book that I think is very good. After all, there are very few fanfics that can make me feel real emotions. Finally: ggad is real! ! !

Sijiao's love is extraordinary. As a little snake, he is absolutely supportive of his dean ヾ(◍ ° ㉨ ° ◍)ﾉﾞ, but this fanfic has changed my love for him [smirk]. As expected, Sijiao's charm after washing his hair is unmatched [shy][shy]

She's super good-looking. I really like Anna's character [Admiration]. She's beautiful and sassy, ​​and her background is also awesome. I just feel bad that Anna doesn't know when she can truly regard herself as a part of this world, open her heart, and stop thinking about leaving. (Don't worry about me nagging here for so long, this only shows that the author's writing style is so good (˶‾᷄ ⁻̫ ‾᷅˵), it made me get involved [laughs]). Come on, the author [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

End of the text Spreading flowers (●✿∀✿●) In fact, it has been posted for a long time. Who told me to take a holiday? It is definitely not because I am lazy! Okay, back to the topic, this book is the best HP fanfic I have read so far, but I believe it will always remain in my memory. First of all, I have to give a thumbs up to the author. Da Da's writing is really good, and it really makes me feel that the content of this book is what really happened in the magical world. Anna has brought us the most beautiful magical world, the longing and yearning Dawn Islands. Next is the heroine Anna. In fact, I have dabbled in both male and female hp fandoms, but Anna is a breath of fresh air. She is the best hp fan protagonist I have ever seen. She has a big picture, is ambitious, is not romantically obsessed, and is considerate of her subordinates. She is a true A true heroine. I won't criticize certain HP fans by name here. The male protagonist was fine at first, but then after they fell in love, he only showed their love. It would make people feel that he was born just for love. But Anna is different. She has her own goals and her own goals. She will sacrifice her life for the mutual integration between wizards and ordinary people, and leave her lover. Here is another big call for her. The plot is well arranged and connected one by one. The relationship between Anna and Sijiao is also very fresh. They are both people who can sacrifice everything for each other. They are the best partners and the closest partners. Although their stories are over in this book, I believe that in their world, their stories continue and will continue forever and never end. Okay, my first long review is dedicated to Anna, to Dada, thank you for spending a wonderful time with this book ε٩(๑> ₃ )

For me, it's a very novel angle in HP fandoms. I like it a lot but there are too few. I hope there will be more updates during holidays and weekends. Hehehehe, I also like the heroine's setting. Come on. I like ₍•ʚ•₎•ʚ•₎•ʚ•₎. After searching for so long, I finally found the heroine I like. The only drawback is that I can't get enough of it [I almost cried]

Anna Albus Grindelwald, while you love all living beings, you must also love yourself. (I have wild thoughts in my heart): Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I like it so much😍😍😍😍, I love the last round so much Goodbye👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍 🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻Ahhhhhh I like it😍😍😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍Obsessed, please give me a boost, the author, can you please make a return bell of Genshin Impact that is so miserable? (Don't call me scared) The author is so awesome👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Like it very much! ! Like it very much! ! The author's writing is really super, super, super gentle. [Crazy] [Crazy] [Crazy] There are many chapters that I really read over and over again... Anna is super gentle... She is really like moonlight... I like her so much! ! ! [Not sure if this is a spoiler, please read below with caution! I really like how Snape's relationship is handled in this article. He doesn't ignore his original feelings, and it's not abrupt or awkward. He and the heroine are completely natural. I love it! ! ! ! ! I also like the handling of ggad! ! It feels warm and gentle. There are a few sad chapters in the middle (for me)... I really skipped it when I read it for the first time... I dared to read it only after re-reading it... I really like the extra hehehehe, Phoenix is so cute! ! ! The treatment of loops is also very good. I really like the repetition of reincarnation...! ! ! Anyway it is! ! It's a super nice book! !

This book is really good. I originally recommended it and added it to my bookshelf. I stayed up late at night, mainly because the plot was really good. I didn't open the Tomato novel for a while due to special circumstances. Then I came back and read all the updates and endings. [Shy] I fell in love with this fairy. [Admiration] The ending is really beautiful, like a fairy tale [blowing kiss]

The author's writing is great, the world view is grand and complete, Anna is gentle, so is Death, and everyone has a gentle ending. To be honest, I only watched the first Harry Potter movie, and spent the rest of my time reading fan fiction, but I also learned the general story of the Harry Potter movies.

Anna, the heroine of this book, really illuminates others like the moonlight, and Si Jiao and Anna really redeem each other. Si Jiao is what Anna's heart desires [almost crying]. Anyway, both of them are very, very good. Moreover, Anna, as the leader of a new generation of saints, has really grand ideals. The author's description of the Isle of Dawn really shocked me [salute], and the author also added a lot of things related to China. All in all, this book is really beautiful, and it lives up to the high score of 9.5 [Blowing kiss] (ps: I just feel that the book is small in length, not very detailed, and a bit unreadable. The setting of this book is the rebirth of Sri Lanka + pro era + ggad. If you like it, you can feel free to enter [give me your heart]) This is my second brush. I saw someone recommending it on Douyin. I saw the title of the book "The Baptism of Butterflies" and thought I had never read it. To be honest, the title of the book is so literary and artistic, and I felt that I had never read it. But after searching, I found that it was Anna's book, so I rewarded myself by reading it again [blowing kiss]. Anyway, it is invincible and beautiful. I strongly recommend [send heart] @between the tides

This is truly a masterpiece! ! ! I feel that every one of them is wonderful. I have added a lot of bookmarks after reading it. Come on, author! Mua [love] I am a palace fan! Yay!

It is an HP fanfic that integrates a private world view, adding concepts such as gods, parallel worlds, cultivation world, and utopia. It is a novel with a very grand setting. The heroine's "golden finger" is very powerful. The main plot of the novel is a subversive change in the parent generation period. It directly/indirectly saves everyone and combines GGAD, so that the main plot of hp no longer exists [laughing] The shortcoming is that the emotional line is not as well written as the career line (maybe because the career line is too well written [laughing]). The writing is very open at the beginning, half of the novel has only passed two grades, and then it is closed all at once. The plot of several years has passed by, and it feels like it has ended in a hurry. After all, this world view is worth writing a long novel. The author [gets it] I feel like saying too much would be spoilers. The shortcomings are not worth mentioning compared to the advantages. It is indeed worth watching [Like]

This book is really made by the author. I like the Harry Potter genre very much. What surprised me the most was that their children returned to the normal original work. Later, I saved some regrets. I felt that I might have shed too many tears. Although I felt a little jealous, it is really a good-looking book. Although it is very short, it is short and beautiful. \(//∇//)\Cheering for you! ! ! ! ! ! ☆ * . ☆ . ∧＿∧∩* ☆ * ☆ (∀)/ . . ⊂ ノ* ☆ ☆ * (つ ノ .☆ (ノ

Help, I really love this book. I stayed up late to read it. Even though I knew the text was he, I still had it cut when the knife came. The extra content in the back was something I never expected. It was a complete surprise. I was really excited! It has a beginning and an end, and the story ends perfectly. As someone with a low level of education, all I can say is, read it all! ! (Broken sound), once again, this book is really well written! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It really fulfilled the dreams of hp fans: James and Lily are still there, GGAD is also alive and well, Harry does not have to bear the burden of being a savior and can always be a carefree child, Snape no longer has to regret telling Lily about being a Mudblood, and he also has someone he likes/loves him. The ending is a happy ending, all the villains are burped, and the two worlds are connected in the extra story. It is truly achieved. A perfect closed loop, I also completely brought into the emotions of the heroine and I was sad and happy with her [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][ Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart]

Thank you to the author for rewriting a chapter of perfection for all the regrets. Very well written. Anna, the original heroine, is so special and great, as if she really exists in another parallel world. This is the perfection of another world, the perfection of many familiar regrets! Anna is really good. If she existed in Professor Snape's world from the beginning, that greasy, poor big bat wouldn't exist! But Professor Snape, who stayed alone all his life for love and was willing to protect everything for his beloved, even lost his life and still did not change his original intention, still makes me feel extremely pity for him. May all the lovers in the world finally find the right person and stay with them and love each other for the rest of their lives!

The writing is very well written, and I was fascinated by it as I read it, completely forgetting that I was reading a fanfic. As an extremely picky person, there are only a few articles that I can read completely, and there are even fewer articles that I can read a second time. However, I read the big text word for word and even read it twice. When I saw Anna in Godric's Hollow, her body couldn't bear her magic and broke apart. I even cried TT, as if I was Snape. It can be seen that the writing style of the big one is really good. Dad, I want to write a reading style using your writing, is that okay? @Betweentides

May the stars always shine at the moment we meet. Although we are in darkness, we still want the light. The full text flows very smoothly, and I think it can be regarded as the ceiling of this series. It is difficult to imagine that this story was born. At first, it was just because the author felt that there were no good-looking fan stories. A small butterfly flapping its wings can have a great impact. Worth a look, recommended [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

I love it so much and it makes up for everyone's regrets. Principal Albus Dumbledore and Mr. Gellert Grindelwald break the estrangement, get back together, and spend the rest of their lives peacefully. Professor Severus Snape also finds his redemption (Ann Baiyue) Anna Albus Grindelwald), Lily Evans and James Potter were not killed by Voldemort, Harry Potter did not have to lose his parents, Regulus Black did not follow Voldemort, did not sacrifice for Slytherin's locket, Bellatrix Lestrange did not die and is no longer obsessed with Voldemort, the ending is happy, no regrets😌

I stayed up late to read it. It's really good. How can I not give five stars to such a beautiful book? [Laughing] First, let me correct the typo above, which is "how can" Secondly, I highly recommend this book. Although the rating is not very high now, I believe this book will definitely become popular. Big boost for the author! [Blowing kiss]

The author's writing is very good! Admire, admire! The content is so exciting, five-star praise, five-star praise (✧∇✧) I declare! ! This book has become a god among HP fans in my mind! So pretty! ! The logic is reasonable, the content is rich and exciting, the plot is profound, and the writing is excellent, leaving readers with a lot of room for imagination. The key is the tenderness between the handwriting, which is very charming~_(:3 ⌒ﾞ)_Great love, great love

This work is one of the few books that touches me. From about the beginning of the episode when Anna left Severus to the end of the text, the complicated and strong emotions made my reading speed gradually slow down, and my emotions became more and more "heavy", as if I was carrying them forward. I have not found a similar sense of touch in "Journey to the West" and "Water Margin", nor in Jin Yong's works such as "The Condor Shooting", nor in foreign masterpieces such as "Steel" and "Robinson Crusoe". It seems that none of them are so close to my soul, but are like watching other people's past events indifferently. Even HP's original work is not as touching as this one. For me, the only thing that can come to mind can compare with the grandeur of "The Three-Body Problem". Therefore, I would like to regard it as a masterpiece, the second work that stirred my inner emotions. Thanks to the author, I wish you all the best, and I hope you can find the butterfly that belongs to you. ——A butterfly chaser who did not want to leave his name After reading it, I felt like I was in another world, as if I had personally traveled through this period of about twenty years in a short period of time. It was really amazing. How precious!