Reborn as a Husky in the Apocalypse

That's great! Could you write more about animals? I'm getting tired of reading about people; seeing things from an animal's perspective is very helpful.

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The premise is good; I noticed the animals were the ones who entered. However, the author's world-building is vast but poorly executed. Also, only the beginning is readable; the rest is basically just wish-fulfillment. The worst part is that Jiang Yong lets people go, even though others have already poisoned and attempted to kill.

Those who were originally plotting against the master were all killed, and now that the Zhang family knows what their plan is, what's wrong with the protagonist? Why is he so clueless? He just ignores everything? And then there's the surprise when the mother arrives? Why not coordinate with either side?

Generally, chapters 83 and onwards have some problematic moments, such as deliberately turning enemies into zombie bosses or intentionally letting enemies escape, reverting to formulaic storytelling. Just read the beginning; I don't want to follow the later chapters. Most importantly, the world-building is quite extensive, making it easy for the writing to fall apart.

In my personal opinion, the protagonist's indecisiveness and constant use of superfluous explanations, dragging out solutions when they could have been resolved earlier, makes him seem intellectually challenged. This is a major flaw.

There's too much repetition. Furthermore, the strength levels aren't clearly defined. And the idea of having the upper hand is completely inaccurate. There's also too much unnecessary dialogue. Plus, the zombies are portrayed as far too powerful. If this weren't a novel, and if the zombies you wrote were real-world zombies, the protagonist would have died seven or eight times over by now. They'd be dead long ago.

I woke up to find myself a Siberian Husky in the apocalypse! Well, while others are all cool and ruthless in the apocalypse, what am I, a Siberian Husky, supposed to do? Watch as the mighty Siberian Husky and his peculiar companions embark on their survival adventures in the post-apocalyptic world.

Author, you're pacing this up a bit; I was completely lost by chapter 70. So, if everyone could take down a zombie with a single punch, that kind of writing wouldn't be interesting.

It's alright, but sometimes it feels too far removed from the main theme. Shouldn't you mainly focus on the protagonist? Why do you always have to write about other people and things so comprehensively? But the story is engaging. If it were adapted into a manga, it would probably be very good. In that case, there would definitely be less unnecessary dialogue.