I Split the Earth and Became the King, and Became the Emperor of the New Dynasty

To be honest, this book has a low Tomato rating. No matter from the plot design, various character creations and settings, it feels like you are in a real world. The characters in his works are all flesh and blood, as vivid as a movie, rather than a simple outline of words! The situational dialogue has depth, is not rigid, and has a sense of empathy. You seem to be able to feel the emotions of the characters. The author is remarkable in terms of his writing style. I have to say: There is a lot of spirit in his writing, and you can tell who he is by looking at his writing! Good!

At first I thought it was a cool article! ! As I read it, I became more and more fascinated. The author's writing style made me feel like I was reading a book by Zhang Jiajia, which seemed to be a literary work. Very good, like it

It's really super pretty. It really depicts a scene of troubled times. It's really good-looking. The plot is interlocking and compact. It's not a mindless plot to make a fortune. It's really good-looking.

Like "Swordsman in the Snow", it is a novel that can be used to confer gods. It is not a cool novel, but the plot is so well written that it feels like I have traveled to ancient times. It is the best historical novel I have ever read [Blowing Kiss]

It's really not embarrassing, this is the most detailed description of the characters' emotions among the books I have ever read, and the foreshadowing and pitfalls are well written, unlike other time-traveling and mindless novels. This book has a clear and logical thinking. I feel that the rating of 9.0 Is really low.

Three tips before reading: 1. If you want to read Shuangwen, turn left when going out; 2 The protagonist is just an ordinary person who behaves steadily; 3. The supporting characters' actions have their own logic, and should not be too taken from the protagonist's perspective. This book is very well written. I don't know how to review books, but I think it's beautiful and the writing is smooth. The disadvantage is that it has less refreshment and is not suitable for mainstream tomatoes. I hope the author will continue to work hard! !

The Little Boss from the old racecourse on Sitong Road to Horseshoe Lake is very exciting, passionate and tragic. The struggle of the little people to survive describes the feeling of preferring to be a peace dog rather than a person in troubled times! The old officers, the Tongzi camp, the veteran camp, the petty officials, and the young marquis all died with goosebumps. I wanted to have a fight with my Erha! The people of Di laugh at me for criticizing people who are sick and weak. Look at the ancestors on the city wall who are still able to survive thousands of arrows. I am a person who is strong-willed and strong. Can I shoot well? "I was twenty-four that year. I carried a three-foot simple sword, wore bright clothes and an angry horse. I sat under the city gate and looked at the twenty thousand people who were like pigs and dogs!" Entering Shu and becoming the king of Shu was very dull, not as exciting. It was all about playing tricks with all parties and fighting all the time. The farming research and development equipment was mentioned in one stroke, and the battlefield was described in two strokes. There was no trace of the misery of Wangzhou, the thrill of entering the inner city, the passion, resourcefulness, and danger of running from the inner city to the border and going deep into the grassland! I watched it four times after entering Shu, but I still can't stand it. Maybe I don't have the patience, so I'll just wait until it's over and watch the ending [facepalm] [facepalm]

The pace of the whole book is well controlled, and the plot advances at a suitable pace. Some battle descriptions are not good enough, but overall the flaws are not concealed. For online articles that are updated daily, the author is very capable and has not been carried away by the pace of updates. The entire book has still maintained a consistent style until it is in the later stages of writing, which shows the author's skill and also shows that the author has put a lot of effort into setting the outline.

I love reading it. The whole story has a tight rhythm and there are no watery chapters. It gives people the feeling that the protagonist has solved one problem and has to rush to solve the next one. You will not feel as tired as the characters even if you are involved in it. At this time, when you look back at the number of chapters, you will find that there can be so much content written in one or two hundred chapters, and so many things can happen. The exaggeration of the war and the tragic heroic spirit of the soldiers are moving. It often reminds me of the revolutionary martyrs who were so passionate about defending their home and country. This is a book that made me feel so immersive about poetry for the first time.

I came across this on Douyin. I thought it was a cool article at first, but the more I read, the more strange it became, but I just wanted to read on. It's very well written.

It's good to read. I haven't read such a good book in a long time. It was very slow in the early stage, but then became more and more enthusiastic and developed. It's like watching Xu Mu's rise slowly. I only like to read cool articles and then scold him with a bad mouth. In other words, it's so beautiful

I have been a bookworm for more than 30 years. This book makes me want to continue reading. It has a lot to write about.

To be honest, the writing is very good, the characterization, plot and writing are all good, but it has a bit of the Romance of the Three Kingdoms style. According to the way modern people speak, they may not like this way of speaking, so the score is not too high, but overall it is still very good.

The plot at the beginning of this article is vivid and interesting, and the opening chapter is attractive! With his rich imagination, he describes the protagonist vividly, affectionately and meaningfully. The author uses novel materials and vivid language to present the wonderful article in front of the readers, making people linger over it.

The name is not very good, I give it 9.9 Points. It looks like a sword and horse, very handsome and very strong. Just watch "The Demon Slaying Queen" before. I didn't say anything after watching it. I don't know, I thought you were watching the Romance of the Three Kingdoms here.

A very exciting and touching novel, with many plots that make people cry. There are scenes of suffering for the country and the nation, and the tragedy of the troubled times invaded by barbarians. There are also loyal ministers with green blood, a peerless demon queen, a white-haired general, a righteous hero who saves the country, and the bitterness of an undercover agent... It is magnificent and vivid in its portrayal. It is a patriotic masterpiece worth reading carefully.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, the characters are clearly drawn. There is no golden finger. If I have to say it, they just have modern talents and a strong and loyal brother. The pace is neither fast nor slow. The whole novel seems to record the history of an ill-fated hero.

Very good and fascinating. I always want to start reading and keep reading, which delays my sleep [laughs]

It's really good-looking. It's not like those cookie-cutter cool articles, where you just make some salt or use the poems of great poets and become a great writer. After reading too many cool articles, you feel boring. This book is written with flesh and blood, and has a strong sense of immersion. It has the artistic conception of the ancient war period.

To be honest, the writing is good, and there are many dialects and code words. It is realistic and realistic. It can be seen that the author has a profound knowledge. It is very similar to the combination of the Romance of the Three Kingdoms and the Snow Swordsmanship, and the characters created are relatively successful!

The mountains and rivers are far away in mist and rain, and one sword kills the dynasty in ten years. Good things and good articles [like] wonderful things [like] Although it is about time travel and heroes vying for the throne, it is more realistic than "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms" and is a good article worth reading [Like]

I have not been exposed to Tomato novels for a while, so far I have only read "Tian Yuan", "Mortal Bones", "After My Engagement Was Broken, My Poetic Immortal Identity was Exposed", and "Yipin Commoner". Relatively speaking, I prefer to read Yipin Commoner. There are no exaggerated time travelers with too many skills. The protagonist is not a scientist, so there is no rapid advancement in technology. There are only appropriate improvements and basic technical guidance, such as formations, armor, cotton application, wine production technology, warship design, wooden kites, etc. It is closer to the actual situation and actual operation. Just like now we have many wild ideas, and weapons experts have to slowly implement them. When we go back and look at them a few years later, we find that these things turned out to be so simple at the time. The characters are vividly drawn with flesh and blood, reflecting the righteousness and feelings of family and country. It's just that there are some contradictions in some places in the article, and the logic is not strong, but this does not affect the perception, after all, it is not a mystery novel. It is a pity that as a military advisor, staff member, and counselor, the strategy in the article is relatively simple, and there is no deeper foresight.

Humorous, witty, and well laid out, this is it. . . . People can't help but feel like they are reading Three Kingdoms (Improved Edition)

The characters are carefully drawn, the use of various characters is well arranged, and the strategy is used appropriately! Although he is a time traveler, he does not exaggerate his ability to create all things, nor does he have the aura of a protagonist who can learn everything! It's really a good book! [Smile]

1. Piling is the highlight. 2. The strategy is insidious and vicious. 3. Don't take on the role, it can easily make you sick. 4. It can take the place of the struggle between the workers and peasants and the capitalists. 5. This knife is worth a knife. It is a little less innovative than the protagonist of ordinary time travel novels. Maybe he is not an engineering boss.

I think it's a great book. After reading some interesting articles, I suddenly felt really comfortable reading a book like this (although I haven't read many articles). The plot is interesting and different, and many sentences and words are well written! The detailed description of the relationship between Xu Mu and Cai Wei is really good, and the character development is also very good. Many scenes can be described so that people can have pictures in their minds. But some words can be used less frequently~

The author's writing style is very good! The general trend and power structure of the world in the novel are described very well, showing a very grand picture! The competition between the princes, especially the plots used by each other, is very exquisitely described! But there are also shortcomings, and some details are not considered: 1. The author's world seems a bit small, and transportation between various places, especially marching, seems to take less time; 2. It is not good at describing battle formations; 3. It is not good at portraying small characters, and there are almost none; 4. Some settings are too idealistic. The lower-level sergeants seem to be determined and not afraid of death. The description of all state-owned personnel dying in battle is too unrealistic! ! Overall, this is a rare and good article! ! The more I write, the worse it gets! The author is good at layout and strategy, and is good at writing about heroism, ambition and pride, but he is not good at detail and character portrayal. Many people are facial expressions. Without these fillings, the article will be monotonous and easily make people aesthetically tired!

This book is really good, the characters are full of personality, the priorities are clear, and the plot has both light and dark aspects [Like]

I call the short play "Yipin Commoner" the most passionate drama of the year, and the novel "I Split the Earth and Became the Emperor of the New Dynasty". "Brother Mu, do you want a wife? I'll bring it to you as soon as you ask for it." Xu Mu, a modern engineer, transformed into a rogue in the city and met a rich girl who was on the run. In troubled times, he fought with swords, bows and horses, vowing to protect his family from survival...

The writing style is okay but I can't stand it. The overall focus is on the sufferings of the people. The sufferings of the people in troubled times have no blood, no happiness, and very little leisure. I feel that the atmosphere is too solemn and makes people feel uncomfortable. However, the author's writing style and knowledge reserve are good and there are novel ancient words. In the end, I conclude by saying "Wild boars cannot taste fine chaff." I'd better read my cool article.