An Endless Journey Through the Honkai, Beginning with the Tree and the Sea

Author, I'm just staring at this book. I'll read a chapter when it's updated [laughs crookedly]

[Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] I'm very optimistic about you, author. Things after 20 pictures are really to my liking.

Mhy, Honkai Impact III can really make me cry. Thank you, the author, for making Honkai Impact III sweet.

Emmmm… The plot is generally okay, but there are some parts that I don't understand, but I feel like I understand it. And judging from these short 38 pictures, the author has great ambitions, and he wants to satisfy himself and make us happy. However, I still have to say that you will finish it very quickly. You are only 38 pictures now, and you are already on your third game. If it is too fast, it will be unstable and it will easily collapse. Slow down and consider the plot. Moreover, some people who read this book may not play these games or only play one or two. You still need to give them an explanation. The above is my understanding. First, try to write it slowly. You are too fast. Those of us who play these games can understand it, but sometimes we are confused, and some people can't understand it, so please take your time. That's probably it, I'll continue to wait and see, so go for it! Saonian, I'm optimistic about you! [Learned]

How should I put it, the setting feels confusing, there are too many world wills, the world jumps too fast, and it looks confusing. The integration of worlds is more difficult for newcomers, and a single world is much easier to write than multiple worlds. Too many related worlds will make it difficult to control, and the plots, characters, and world views of each world will be difficult to integrate. In the first chapter, it is completely possible to expand a book of captains to "exchange lives of equal value" for each Valkyrie, and finally use his own existence to make the final exchange when Otto becomes a false god. Not only can you practice your writing skills, but you can also try to write the emotional line of Valkyrie. Although the plot is old-fashioned, it can still attract some loyal readers. Then open another book to fill in the previous holes and knives, so that readers of the first book will naturally continue to read the second one. The above is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. Come on.

This stuff is so well written. From the first time I watched it, my lips dropped.

It's a dream come true, um, it's very well written. I just feel that the setting (the one similar to personality switching) is a bit too much, and I hope the author will stabilize and stop adding it like this.

Not bad, sweet! I was numbed by mhy's knife recently, and I finally have a sweet one. It's not easy!

Super exciting. As for the content, it is absolutely wonderful. I still hope that there will be beauty and happiness in the back of this book. The characters are still alive. I hope that the author's description of emotions is definitely based on the content. There are also several extra chapters in the work. It's great if you don't stop updating. At least you'll be in good health and everything will go well!

It's a good book. Even I can't help but tilt the corners of my mouth upwards [smile][smile][smile]