Ultraman: I'm Panicking as a Black Dragon

I like this book very much. Please write more about the daily life between the heroine and the heroine. Please spread your love. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙇🙇🙇🙏🙏🙇 🙏🙏🙏🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇 You can write more stories about the heroine and the heroine, and the two of them going to various universes, and write about their interactions with Ultra Warriors in other universes, such as the Orb universe, the Max universe, the Ultraman Trigga universe, and the Zeta universe. This can make the story richer and more interesting. I hope the author can be satisfied🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙏🙏🙏✨✨✨✨✨✨🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙌🙌🙌

It looks good, but the writing style needs to be improved. Also, can there be so many tool people under the protagonist's hands, can they not always be directly on the main body?

The writing style needs to be improved, and the description of the characters' actions, emotions, and details is not enough, so that readers cannot feel well when watching it. The author can try to highlight the protagonist through other people's words, You can also use the five senses: hearing, sight, smell, touch, and taste to describe some special characters and situations in detail. The description of the scene can also be more detailed, making it more interesting to read. In addition, the paragraphs can be divided into more points. This is not writing a composition, but a novel. The more paragraphs, the easier it is for readers to read. It is best to connect each paragraph with the action or expression of the character, such as: Xiao Lu caught a glimpse of a flash of red light in the distance and felt something was wrong, but he didn't pay much attention. Looking at the monsters raging in the city, he felt a little anxious and quickly took out the sublimator. But just when the sublimator was about to be lifted, there was a sudden pause, and then the sublimator was slowly lowered. He looked towards the other side of the city, his eyes gradually becoming dull. A black and red figure soaring into the sky was reflected in the pupils. He opened his mouth slightly and said in disbelief: "That... That's..." "Gilbarris?!!" However, the plot of this book is quite good. You deserve this five-star rating [laughing]

Very good-looking, very good-looking. I'm afraid you'll be proud. I'll give you four stars.

Chapter 15 is what I am excited about [licking the screen][licking the screen], and I give it five stars.

It's so cool. The protagonist is a man who traveled to the Ultra World and became the black dragon Gilbalis, only to become the heroine. Then he came to the Geed World and adopted the human body Xiaolu for 17 years. Just because of its arrival, it triggered a butterfly effect and the villain Tregear, who did not originally appear in the Geed plot, and the replica of Gilbalis and the golden man Big Taurus also came to the Geed world. It's a complete mess. It's a good book.

The writing is very good. I really like this kind of lily in my hometown [laugh][laugh][laugh]. Great support for the author! ! ! [Sending Hearts]

It's very beautiful. Please comment more to make this book come alive! Of course I hope I can give a divine review. If I don't say this, can the author do it? Let the protagonist possess SCP - the deus ex machina! [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] If I can't, I'll cry for you [Grief]

I like it very much. This is the first novel I have reviewed, and it is also the first novel I have reviewed with five stars. I hope the author does not ask for quantity but quality, but it can also be a little watered down. Otherwise, the number of words in a chapter is too small and it will not be enjoyable to read. I don't like to keep books, so I will give a few power-generating gifts for love. [Laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

I really enjoyed reading it, thank you to the author! Looking forward to your next masterpiece ૮(˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)ა