After the Sun Faded

Let me give a brief review. This book is a novice, but it is hard to imagine that it is a novice. The writing is very strong. The world view is beyond imagination. From the end of the world to the truth, combined with wormhole technology and supernatural powers, the entire universe will be very lively. Then there are the detailed descriptions, the growth of the protagonist, and a lot of foreshadowing. The protagonist is weak and has the ability to die but does not dare to cause trouble because he has concerns. If he is resurrected, What should I do if my younger siblings die during this period? I think this explanation is understandable. In the next 5,000 years, the sun goes out, including the thoughts of the professor in the diamond, which are staggering. The most admirable thing is the courage of the author to cut off his wrist. Later, the author cannot control it and ends directly, but the story does not end, leaving room for readers to imagine. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The protagonist and the people around him are too cowardly. They forgive each other even after they were almost beaten to death. No, one died and the other was fine because he was a clone. Although he was saved by the doctor, the protagonist just stabbed him in the eye or was extremely angry and almost died. Isn't it too outrageous? That doctor also went against the grain, saying that he was not a bad character but had a miserable childhood. Wasn't the author just thinking when he wrote this? 😅Also, the author needs to take a look at the combat settings he wrote. Gravity is already invincible, and here comes the flying dragon that destroys the world, as well as the miniature sun and time. There are also more than ten super powers that have not been written. He just turned into a purple sweet potato. The protagonist is not happy and ends with a snap of his fingers😅The collapse of combat power in just 40 chapters is also awesome. Fortunately, the author found out in the end and cut it off in two. Otherwise, this would be a book that can only be read at the beginning. The final summary is that the writing is understandably toxic, but the author needs to change some places, such as the hardened b, which is enough. The writing is okay, the plot is reasonable, the world view exceeds my expectations, and the description of the character's psychology is good. It is a bonus to write about the confusion in the face of the doomsday, because I have read many novels in which the doomsday is like a stone. How can a top laner resist pressure? This book is much better. The protagonist is a bit sentimental. I cannot criticize this character. After all, a high school student does not expect to be very strong. The ending is also timely. It can be used as a book to read when bored and as a background for writing fan fiction. Such a good world view cannot be wasted in vain. A big boss wrote a fan fiction and gave me a kick (doge). As a side note, the plot is too fast and the progress is too urgent. You can try to slow down a bit, but the author prefers to write about everyday cookies, so there is nothing I can do about it. I won't force it.

I really don't believe that this is the first book written by a novice. I think the only flaw of this book is that there are few OE and chapters. Although it does become boring later, I still want to read a TE. The protagonist of this book is a normal person. There is a heroine, but this heroine will not be irritating. There will be no ambiguous and disgusting plots. The description of other characters is also great. In short, this book is really recommended. The world view and star energy are really amazing to think of. In short, I recommend you to read it, only 90 chapters. If you are used to reading the same cool and mindless articles, give it a try and you will be purified by it (a bit exaggerated, but you all understand what I mean XD) I would like to add that it is really unbelievable that such a good book has such a low rating. Anyway, this book is very suitable to my taste. I spent four hours on the whole book. Give it a try and you will like it.

The plot and world view are okay, but from the dialogues between various characters, I can feel that the author's writing style is still very unfamiliar, and I feel that the author is not very old (the author also mentioned in the postscript that he still has to go to school), so these small problems can still be improved through incremental experience. However, one regret is that this book does not have a real ending. Although it is a good ending so far, for a work with such a grand world view, such an ending is obviously a bit petty. However, the author himself also said that he will be more inclined to describe the subsequent life, and for the author's current writing ability, such a grand story may be very difficult, so it is a wise choice to end it. It can be regarded as an open ending, allowing readers to imagine. Finally, I hope that the author can study hard, increase his knowledge and experience, and usher in a true conclusion to the "Faded" series [Chigua]

Although it is said to be over at chapter 90, the content is really good. The final ending is a pity for us, as we did not see the true end of this book.

A sudden change made a little child grow up. It has a warm opening and a slightly regretful ending. There is no real villain here, and there is no real protagonist. There is just the story of a character, flesh and blood, willful but rational. No one is without contradictions. It is precisely because of contradictions that we know that we are human beings. This book is an apocalyptic book, but it is more like a philosophical book. Perhaps due to the author's life and word limit, the pace is slightly faster, but it reads slowly. It also makes us think about ourselves while telling the story. The early and middle stages of the work are written in a general way, but in the later stage, characteristics begin to show, such as the amnesia of a close relative and a loved one in distress. Everything seems so natural, and it is the feeling of basically knowing what to write but still wondering about the content. The last thing I want to say is that books are not only a glimpse of leisure time, but also a small world of one's own.

The protagonist is really a bit too cowardly and settles for the status quo. Such a powerful and perverted superpower, but he can't even protect his younger brothers and sisters. He doesn't know anything about the outside world. He is always in a passive state. The pattern is small. But the novel describes the emotional details of the characters really well, and it's really touching.

The world view is grand and the structure is clear. There are not many pitfalls in the whole text. The characters are vivid. You can see the growth of the protagonist from the article. The description of the scenery is rich and vivid. In my heart, I can't help but be touched, thinking about how gorgeous the starry sky is. Unfortunately, the article ends hastily, like the Lost City of Beasts. How often is it updated? So what, in short, it is good.

Very nice and novel. The author's book has a great beginning, and it's a wonderful story, but the ending is too hasty, and there are some small problems with the setting of abilities. It's not very rigorous, but the flaws are not hidden. It's great, very good, and I'm looking forward to the second volume.

Novel, interesting, and comes with a knife Still the kind of heavy knife at the beginning? The knife is quite harsh, a bit unbearable But the book is very beautiful and very real There are spoilers below, read with caution At the beginning of tnnd, I described my family for a long time. I finally managed to write a warm little family, and it was all over the place at once. You, the author, are so ruthless.

I finished reading it in one sitting, and overall I am very satisfied with it. The plot and everything are well described. What's more valuable is that the author is self-aware, is still in school, is relatively young, and has no experience or time to continue writing this story. I just chose to finish it without forcing myself to write anymore. The author is really great. And the other novels the author is writing now are also very good. I recommend everyone to read them.