Online Game: From the Start, All I Had Was a Beginner's Wooden Sword

This is a slow internet article from the old days. It is a passionate legend who sadly retired. It is undeniable that the author's handling of details is not in place. Wenzao is not gorgeous and beautiful either. But I still look forward to the continuation of the story. Five stars are given, and I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's not a cool novel, it's not a novice novel, it doesn't have a bad word count, and the characters are thoughtful. The relationship between the characters is barely interesting, and some details are also not handled well. It is even less popular than Lost Leaves' Zongheng and Wushuang, but at a time when tomato novels are everywhere, this is a good book. I hope that the foreshadowing ahead will make the pie full, and please update as soon as possible. Nowadays, I still read a lot of cool articles. You can tell by the number of chapter reviews. It doesn't matter whether you have a brain or not. Just do it for fun. It's too impetuous. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

One star is missing because of the female protagonist. In the introduction, the landlord is mentioned separately, so she should be the female protagonist, while in the game she is a friend (personal understanding), but the writing in the article is a bit off. . Well, it could also be a double heroine. Personally, I think a single heroine (landlord) is better, and the other one can give a good result, (don't comment if you don't like it), eh. . The author's writing is generally good, keep up the good work💪!

The writing is pretty good! He was chased by others before he came up. The supporting characters are also quite distinctive, but they are a bit slow to warm up. Everyone, take your time and watch. Great support for the author [please update]

Writing about fighting monsters is a bit boring. Try to avoid the visualization of some data-based and procedural text. It is recommended that the text be slightly focused on the expressiveness and visual refinement, that is, to improve the quality of writing, you can use literary language; All other aspects have their own shadow of the above-mentioned problems. For example, emotional scenes can be more delicate, funny passages can be more humorous, and contrast and other expression techniques can be used more; Generally speaking, it is much better than similar novels, but there is still a lot of room for improvement. You can refer to some literary writing methods, or refer to some well-written online games and online articles, and the fighting plot can be more vivid; I have always believed that online novels are also an important form of literature. The author has a great writing spirit. I just hope there will be more unexpected plots and wonderful images. The author must work hard to improve and look forward to excellent works.

It's a rare writing method for traditional online games nowadays. It's really good.

The writing is very good, and it has the same feeling as the previous game articles. I am tired of reading the current game articles, and I can't find the previous ones (I mainly forgot the name). When I read this book, I felt like I was reading a game article for the first time. Overall, it is a combination of reality and games. There is no sense of déjà vu when writing about games, and the daily writing is okay. Mainly, two couple sets, three people. This setting is indeed a bit annoying to me. Apart from this, I can't find any faults in other parts that make me uncomfortable. The plot is still very attractive. Come on, author.

Come on, I believe you can write better and better (I accidentally stayed up late and read more than 100 chapters [face covering])

It's well written. Most online games these days are invincible at the beginning with SSS. Personally, I don't really like them. This type of writing is still very good, but the first few chapters are a bit unsmooth, but it doesn't affect the reading. I just want to know what to do with the two female protagonists? It all feels pretty good, and the emotional line is pretty good. Just hope it doesn't break down! Come on author! ! !

It's very interesting, and the writing is to my liking. It's hard to find such comfortable online game writing these days. I hope I can finish it. Come on💪