Online Game: From the Start, All I Had Was a Beginner's Wooden Sword

This is a slow-paced online novel from the old era. It's a legendary tale of passion that fades away in disappointment. Undeniably, the author's attention to detail is lacking, and the writing style isn't particularly ornate or elegant. But I still look forward to the continuation of the story. Five stars! I hope the author continues to strive for excellence.

It's not a wish-fulfillment novel, not a simplistic one, and it doesn't pad the word count; the characters are intelligent. The character relationships are a bit weak, and some details are poorly handled. It's not quite as polished as Lost Leaf's *Zongheng* and *Wushuang*, but in a market saturated with wish-fulfillment novels, this is a good book.

I'm only missing one star because of the female lead. The synopsis mentions the landlady separately, who should be the female lead, and in the game, she's a friend (my personal understanding). But the writing in the story seems a bit off-topic. Hmm, it could also be two female leads, but I personally think a single female lead (the landlady) would be better, and the other one could have a good ending (please don't be offended if you disagree). Overall, the author's writing is good, keep it up! 💪

It's quite well-written! The protagonist isn't immediately chased by enemies, and the supporting characters are all quite distinctive. It's just a bit slow-paced. Take your time reading! Author, keep up the good work! [Requesting more updates!]

The monster-fighting scenes are somewhat dry. Try to avoid visualizing data and processes; focus more on expressiveness and imagery—improving the writing quality and using more literary language. Other aspects also show similar issues. For example, the emotional scenes could be more nuanced, the comedic parts could be more humorous, and more contrasting techniques could be used.

This is a very rare style of writing for traditional online games nowadays, it's really quite good.

It's very well written, reminiscent of classic game novels. I'm tired of the current game novels, and I can't find the older ones (mainly because I've forgotten the titles). Reading this book felt like reading my first game novel. Overall, it blends reality and the game, without the isekai (otherworld) feel of purely game-themed novels. The slice-of-life scenes are also well-written.

Keep it up! I believe you can write better and better (I accidentally stayed up all night reading over 100 chapters 🤦).

It's well-written. Most online games these days have that SSS-rank start with invincibility, which I personally don't really like. This one is quite well-written, though the first few chapters are a bit disjointed, but it doesn't affect the overall reading experience. I'm just wondering how they handle having two female leads? Everything seems pretty good, and the romance is engaging. I just hope it doesn't fall apart! Keep it up, author!!!

It's really good, and the writing style is right up my alley. These days, it's hard to find such a comfortable online game novel. I hope it's finished. Keep it up! 💪