Honkai Impact 3Rd: So This Is an Anime Crossover World

The author is the first to say something, nice! Awesome Claes! Awesome Claes

For a reader who often reads comic novels, the writing is okay, but I can only give it four stars. You wrote that the world is too huge, and there are a lot of foreshadowings and systems. In fact, writing this system is a bit of a failure. The system has three functions, chat group (time travel), answering questions and fulfilling wishes. It is very difficult to write in the later stage and it is easy to collapse because the three functions of the system need to be written and they need to appear frequently. It is difficult to control it. If you only write about the two functions of system chat group and wish fulfillment, fortunately, it will be easier to write this way. I hope you can stick to it! Writing like this often ends badly, and I don't want you to be one of them.

The setting is a bit complicated, and there are dozens of Honkai and Jojo female characters, as well as those from other anime, which makes it difficult to write. The first few chapters were fine, but in the eighth chapter a system suddenly popped up. Its functions include a chat group and a question answering space, and it can also be used to travel to other worlds. This kind of writing is not strong enough, and it is very easy to collapse when writing. Originally, Honkai Impact and Warring could be written together. I think it is a very good work. Now I can only wish the author to work hard.

For me, Honkai Impact is quite rare. I saw it and it looked pretty good.

It's hard work, I wrote it wrong. You use the stories in the book to bring us happiness and sadness, and give us the possibility to realize our fantasies. You used the stories in your book to let us know that there is no absolute justice or absolute evil. Personally, I like your book very much. For me, when I read a book, I just read a book. I don't need to distinguish between reality and saying that I can read a book. I don't have to distinguish between three views, but I must ensure that it will not affect my mood and character. So I think those who casually criticize others under book reviews, criticize the author, and others are very boring behavior. I don't know much about Honkai Impact, and I don't know much about Genshin Impact. As an outsider, your writing is pretty good. Don't care too much about other people's thoughts. Although this is advice from a child, I still hope you can cheer up. You are not required to finish the book, but you are required to live a happy life because you bring me happiness. Although I am not a huge fan of this book, I will always remember having your book on my shelf. As a person, I feel that I am a hypocritical person, but I still want to bring good things to others. I hope you can feel happy after reading this paragraph, just for a second. Blessings from lonely people and hypocritical people, I wish you a happy life and a good mood every day. There are small joys every day.

I feel that the writing style is still poor, and the writing is a bit strange. The previous chapters really have a touch of everything, and I feel that the author himself cannot control it. The ambush was written like The Riddler, with a fragmented feel. It would have been fine if it was a daily novel, but this one should have a complete main line. Because you have a little foreshadowing here and a little foreshadowing there, you can't see the complete plot, and the writing style is a little bit worse, the writing is quite riddle, and the whole book can only be said to be average.

There are not many comprehensive comics, let alone those with San Bengzi as the main line, so you must survive, author!

Very pretty [shy]

You say you write well, but why doesn't anyone read your book?

From the beginning to now, I feel a little reluctant to think that this novel will be deleted, but I still hope that the author will live a good life in the future. Author, author, how can I live without you, author [cry][cry][cry]