Eighty Years in the Sword Pavilion, Then I Emerged as an Earthly Immortal

Author, I'm sorry for you. I've been reading your books and never given you a tip. I also wanted to give you a tip, but you updated too slowly. Although I didn't give you a tip, I still want to read your book. Author, I'm sorry for you [crying][crying][crying]

For a bookworm of more than ten years, this book is well written. I won't worry about the shortage of books. The plot will be better if it is written in more detail. It should be arranged as a chess game where the enemy of life and death meets the opponent to be more exciting.

Can you write it faster? . Not enough, not enough at all. . [Awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

Not to mention the time spent watching it, I was fascinated by listening to the book and reading it. The protagonist is cautious and bold, which is a bit different. The cautiousness is because he came from time travel, but the boldness is not clear to me. Also, it is a bit selfish and uncomfortable to watch, but overall it is okay because I like this kind of subject. I hope that the content in the later chapters will be more exciting. There is no hindrance if the text is appropriate, and the early writing is very detailed. And It's just that the living area in the early stage was too safe. When I thought about how there were so many dangers in cultivating immortals, I felt more at ease. There were too few plots between the Taoist sword and the magic sword, which I felt was not good. I felt that the Taoist sword without the sword spirit was too easy to get. Hongqi reshaped the body. This part is also okay, but there are too many descriptions of masters and slaves, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. Overall, it is very beautiful. I like [love] [love] [love]

Very pretty. I read the first few chapters of this book at least 5 times. I just made up my mind to look back yesterday because, at first, I thought it didn't look good. It feels awkward. But when I saw the back, I felt really happy. And this book is not an invincible book that was signed in Jiange for 80 years and was published in one day. Instead, he started with Kendo Tongshen. Kill it step by step. Similar to Emperor Huangtian, but not quite like Emperor Huangtian. Anyway, it is worth recommending. Moreover, the protagonist is not lecherous, nor does he look like those with a bunch of wives. He is a true immortal cultivator. (When I saw more than 400 chapters) (Only my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it) The protagonist's personality is indeed not very good

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Ling for 800 years, Feng Qingxue waited for Baili Tusu for 900 years Years ago, Long Kui waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Niangzi waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for several thousand years, and Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day of a certain year, a woman was lying weakly on the bed, her face was pale, her mouth was trembling slightly, tears glistened at the corners of her eyes, and she murmured in a hoarse voice: "Don't forget to update..."

I can't get enough of it. The opening setting is still novel, so even those who are used to watching fantasy will be interested in watching it. The whole tone is refreshing. Being among the top forces, entering the mysterious sword pavilion. Currently, there is no female protagonist, no brainless slap in the face, the main thing is to practice swordsmanship! Very enjoyable to watch I didn't see the poisonous part. I didn't see the point where the protagonist's character was bad. Some people say that the upgrade is slow, and I am speechless.

The plot is exciting and the concept is exquisite. It feels like watching the development, rise and fall of a sect from a third-person perspective (I haven't seen the fall yet)! What a novel idea! Compared with the same fantasy novels, it has new ideas.

I think it's pretty good. As for the protagonist's character, I think it's because his mentality and character changed after the death of his female disciple, and he began to transform from a mortal character to a cultivator's character. However, the writing style is indeed a bit mishandled, and the character transformation is a bit too blunt. Four points for this setting of the sword.

Why are there so few ratings?,,, A rare good book [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] It's average in the early stage but it's really good later on. It's very imaginative. At least 9 points or more are in line with the temperament of this book.