Quick Transmigration: Thriving After Becoming the Villainess

A treasure trove of articles discovered by accident. The first thing I was attracted to was because the heroine had a cold personality in the first world, which was very good. Even if she fell in love with the male protagonist in the subsequent world, reason will always prevail. She is not a love-minded woman, and she even has a high IQ. That's why it's hard not to like her! It's really not easy for the male protagonist to go through three worlds to make the female protagonist's heart beat. I think the world behind it is so sweet 8? ! In the first world, I felt very sorry for the male protagonist. Every time the male protagonist died, I cried. Fortunately, the heroine and I went in both directions. No one was hurting the other, and no one misunderstood the other. It was very comfortable and not aggrieved at all. I almost drove them crazy hehehehe. I also suddenly discovered that the author is also a night owl. He commented in the middle of the night and would like every post. I am so happy! ! !

Is this the second book of Thirteen? As the writing style was unfamiliar at first, I gradually became familiar with it later on. But I still have some small suggestions for this book. The language is not elegant enough, so I suggest you accumulate it. (For example, the description of the character's appearance and the origin of the character's abilities can be concisely elaborated without going into too much detail.) The character's dialogue language expression is a bit stiff and unnatural. You can try to strengthen the emotional color a little. The character's personality is not expressed accurately enough. It is best to define the character first and then arrange the plot development for him. Although it seems that there are still many shortcomings, overall it is still good, please continue to work hard. (Personal suggestion, don't spray if you don't like it) I give you five stars to show my support!

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I don't want to give full marks, but the male protagonist can act as the female protagonist's mouthpiece! Who doesn't love this!

Very good. The female protagonist is very capable and learns skills quickly. She has a golden finger space. She abuses the scum without mercy. The male protagonist is also clean physically and mentally, loyal and virtuous. However, the system is a bit rubbish and always makes mistakes... But the overall situation is still good, but the ending is a bit unexpected. The identities of the male and female protagonists are reversed [get it] [eating melon]

It's very beautiful and I love watching it [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart] Feng Ninghan and Ji Yanling really have a good relationship [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] It's just that there are so few stories, I still want to read it [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] I also really want to know the story of Aunt Siren in the interstellar plane. I hope the author will continue to work hard [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Not bad. There are typos and wrong names. The main plot is about the heroine who is the way of heaven and goes to her own small world to survive the calamity of life and death, but the male protagonist does something bad with good intentions, which makes the heroine's calamity of life and death more serious. Then the male protagonist accompanies the heroine to go through various small worlds to regain her memory and return to the divine world. It's considered a strong man, a strong woman, 1v1.

It's very beautiful. I want to study but I can't. I'm going to school tomorrow. I'm so sad (๑óò๑)

The writing is very good, but I always felt that the emotions in the first plane came too suddenly.

I hope there can be a small world where the original heroine is a good person.