Naruto: God of Water

The plot is good, but sometimes the first person and sometimes the third person are spoken without double quotation marks, which seems troublesome. I hope it can be corrected later so that the book can go further. Come on, come on, come on ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧

This book is indeed good, but sometimes it is written in the first person and sometimes it is written in the third person, which makes me feel superior. I can't stand it anymore. The foundation is good, but the author's writing style is too bad. It can't support the author's ideas. He often doesn't add punctuation marks. The first person and the third person are confusing. The viewing experience is too bad. I can't stand it anymore. It's a pity. This book obviously has good ideas, but because the author's writing style is not good, the writing is too rough, like a delicacy with a dollop of orelli added to it.

Good books that have been buried

It looks good, very good-looking, but can you put "" double quotes in the dialogue?

It looks good, but why are the personal pronouns always confused, sometimes first person, sometimes third person. Also, why are there no double quotation marks in the words? I can't figure out which one is speaking and which one is thinking. It's annoying to watch. However, the content is still good and I believe it will get better and better.

The plot suits my taste. I hope it can be done better and faster🥳

I felt that the whole book was okay, but in the later stages, it was at levels 100 to 120 that I couldn't understand it. Maybe it's my problem. If it's not my problem, it's that the writing is not very clear. But I still think this book is very good.

Find a girlfriend for the protagonist and start a harem

How come no one reads such a beautiful book?

It is really a good book that has been buried. The more I read it, the more I enjoy it.