Genshin Impact: Ningguang Is My Sister

Very pretty. But it would be better if the main character is dark. The seeds of hatred rose in my heart.

Newbies, don't be intimidated by the ratings and comments. There is a difference between reading chapter 16 and before reading chapter 16. Don't be too picky about other things. The author is a student, and it is already very good to write like this.

I'm looking forward to the story after Ning Yue returns. Ningyue is an immature child who is gradually growing up. Only by experiencing wind and rain, pain and suffering can she truly grow. This book is actually very good. The reason why I couldn't adapt to it may be because Ning Yue's behavior is too childish compared to the protagonists in other books. Because they are all time travellers, I instinctively think that the protagonist needs to be more mature. But they have forgotten that the protagonist is originally a student in junior high school, and it is normal for his immature mentality. Author, I support you, come on! ! !

Come on, author! I look forward to the time when the departed young man comes back and summons all the immortals in Liyue to vow to restore a peaceful world to the world!

I think this book is good 1. Most of Tomato's Genshin Impact protagonists are too strong. This book leaves room for improvement for the protagonists. 2. The protagonists of Genshin Impact are basically pure good people. The protagonist of this book does behave like a playboy, but he does not actually bring harm to people, but makes people happy. After all, no one has taught the protagonist good values ​​since he was a child, so I can also accept the way the protagonist treats people. 3. Most Genshin Impact novels have a common problem. Characters often develop a liking for, or even like, the protagonist because of trivial matters. The protagonist of this book and Hu Tao have a relationship. They are childhood sweethearts, but they have misunderstandings, but they have always been in love and killing each other.

Is the protagonist really a time traveler?

Come on, author, it doesn't matter what others say. As long as you write well and are good enough, others will pay attention to you. In the field of novels, most of our readers will not ignore a good author. Come on! The protagonist was not very old before the time travel. Although he was integrated after the time travel, he was still a child after all. Children always have a stubbornness, especially during the rebellious period, and the pressure during that period was also great. The protagonist would also feel very embarrassed, so he would not think that he had a problem, and he would not be able to react immediately. As mentioned later, the protagonist has that kind of temperament, so this is very consistent. Why is the comment section like this? Maybe it's just that most people want to escape. Why do they want to read novels? In fact, it is to put yourself into the protagonist of the novel and experience the feeling that does not exist in reality. However, once it is divorced from what they imagined, they will feel that the novel is not well written. When reading novels, you need to think a lot. Think about how old the protagonist is and what his background is.

Damn it, I finished it in a while, there are very few fanfics that I want to read in one go. Is this really written by a student? It's full of emotional resonance!

The writing is good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡, although the content is not much, but I feel relieved when I think that the author is a student

Come on, Ollie! It's a good write-up. I hope our team will grow more and more, and the attack will be 8.9. No matter how bad the score of this book is, we will always support you! Finally, please take care of yourself and don't stay up late typing. It's so sad to have a gray head! [Sneaky laugh]