[Adorable kids + everyone’s favorite + face-slapping] Seven years ago, she was framed and spent a night with a strange man. Seven years later, she returned to the country with two children, a glittering reputation, and a career as an internationally renowned top chef. Lin Weimian only wanted to earn a good living and raise her kids, but on her very first day back, their dad snatched the children away. How could she put up with that? “You’re the woman who slept with me seven years ago and then called me an idiot?” The man glared at her, his face icy. Lin Weimian replied guiltily, “I was just being nice and leaving you money to buy clothes!” He curled his lips into a smile and pulled her into his arms. “Since you’re so broke, why don’t I give you all my cards from now on, and you can buy my clothes?”
I should finish junior high before writing this! This is rambling nonsense, full of holes. Go find a factory job! What kind of writing is this?! It's just fabricated nonsense, a waste of the reader's time!
Great job! Keep it up!
The first half was quite interesting, but the second half went a bit off-topic.