Mu Tiange

Excellent work no one Those who are able will be rewarded first√

It's bland and comfortable, and the writing is good. Cheers, author 😊

I haven't read it much now, but the rating for this book is low. According to the Tomato rating, it should be above 9.1. I personally rate it higher. The writing is good, and the male and female protagonists are also well described. There is no shortage of main lines and foreshadowing. Many of the descriptions feel more mature and seasoned. Was there an accident when the book was first published, or is it that the current novel has been revised once, so it shouldn't be rated so low [face covering]

It's quite beautiful, I don't know why so few people see it. Very comfortable to read. It's just that the name was so ordinary that I almost didn't read it.

I feel that this book is better than many novels nowadays, but I feel that not many people read it. I prefer to slowly add feelings later on. I don't like those with single female protagonists who have ambiguous relationships with other girls. It's uncomfortable to watch, so I might as well write about a harem. In a single female protagonist novel I read before, two girls liked the male protagonist, and the male protagonist only liked the female protagonist. The characters of these two girls were very good, but in the end Although the male and female protagonists still like each other, they are not together for some reasons, and the other girl still likes the male protagonist. I still feel uncomfortable. I wish it was a harem novel and included both girls. Therefore, I generally like harems in fanfics, and the others don't matter. If there is only one female protagonist, write the heroine well and don't have ambiguities with other girls. Personal emotions, don't mind [grievance]

First of all, let me make it clear that this is not a malicious review, so I will give it four stars. I didn't watch a lot of content, but it was quite a lot. There are some minor pitfalls in the early stage that I want to talk about. For example, after Chen Longhua died, the protagonist said ojbk while fighting monsters later, which particularly ruined the atmosphere. There are many places where the language ruins the atmosphere, but the impact is not particularly great, but it does make people feel a little uncomfortable. It gave me a feeling like I wasn't fully involved with the characters in the book. There is also a relatively big poisonous point. The plot of Song Yezhu's battle to become emperor gave me a very forced feeling. Obviously he could have arrived a little earlier to prevent the incident from happening, but he had to chat for more than ten minutes, waiting for the incident to happen and people to die before taking action. I can understand the purpose of the high-level government, but why are there not even a few safeguards? She's not the Holy Mother, but she can't ignore death. This really makes me sad because of the poisonous point of this plot. I hope the author can think more carefully, improve the characters' emotions, work hard on the plot, and think carefully. My intention is not to say that this book is bad, just to make a suggestion. If I said anything wrong, just think that all my words are nonsense and you don't need to listen [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

(I don't know why the previous comment didn't seem to be displayed in the comment area) After browsing it for a while, I felt that the book was pretty good. The lack of popularity may be because it was too short. Author, your idea of hiding the heroine is quite good, but your level seems not good enough. I thought you were watching a harem...

It's pretty good, keep up the good work, brother.

I want to share some of my feelings and thoughts after reading this book It goes without saying that the book is a good book. I found this book and read it day and night. It can be said that I have just finished it. Today is the 30th of the year and I wish the author a Happy New Year. The author is more delicate in describing the relationship between the male and female protagonists and the details of the fight. However, I think it may be a little worse in terms of plot advancement and there are fewer scenes. Some other scenes can be added. These are my suggestions, but overall this book is still very good! The author's writing is also very good!

Seeing that this kind of book is actually quite good to me now, it ranks among the top fifty among the hundreds of books I have read. Don't be discouraged because I have read hundreds of books. I can tell if it is good or not by reading just one chapter. You can ask people around you to read it and give you some opinions. Everyone has different opinions. I believe you can write this book well. Come on. Wow, it's so late and there are still people still awake?

It's very interesting. I like the current relationship between the male and female protagonists [cool]. It feels like they are more than friends but not yet satisfied with their lovers.

It's good to watch, but I can't stand the rest of it [cover face][cover face][cover face]. The latter part is also good to watch, but I may not be able to accept a book with so many chapters. More is also an advantage, so I jumped directly to the finale and watched the ending. It was satisfactory.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that the author's writing is very detailed. Urban supernatural stories rarely have such details of daily life and lack plot advancement. Especially the foreshadowing of the plot, the feeling that the storm is coming and the storm is coming is really touching. Most urban supernatural protagonists start with their talents maxed out, and then get invincible scores in the college entrance examination, and then the typical choice is to choose a college, and then compete in the college. After that, it's almost time to become invincible. This book has a very novel feel. I can see the shadow of Zhan Shen. Come on, author.

It's quite good. It's very detailed and contains lots of emotional lines. The life part is also written very delicately. The author should be a person who understands life very well. Although there are few fights, the writing is comprehensive. But the most uncomfortable thing is this person's name. I feel like I can't remember them at all, especially those foreign names. There is also the relationship between the protagonist's parents. Although there is nothing wrong with it, it really makes me feel uncomfortable no matter what I think.

This fight scene is really uncomfortable... But the plot is good [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] but I can't stand it. The emotional scene is too slow and I can't stand it... Wrong payment, author [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

It's pretty good, at least it's to my taste. It may be a bit sensational and a bit blunt, and some of the transitions are not perfect, but it's still pretty good in Tomato [eat melon]. I came to comment before I finished reading it, because the dragons and swords in PS [take a closer look]

The plot is pretty good, but there are some flaws and logical problems. The lyrics are awkward in some places. Not only does it have no feeling, but it's also a bit stiff. There are many problems to be solved. This is supposed to be the author's first book and it's not very well written, but I hope the author can improve next time.

I can only say that the low rating is not the fault of the author, but because there are too few people. The logic of this book is not confusing. Although the protagonist has a halo, he is not exaggerated. It is very interesting and there are many wonderful moments. I hope the author can continue to work hard. Such a beautiful book must not be buried (*¯¯*)!

It's really good to watch. The rating of 8.3 Is still underestimated. It's a pity that no one has watched it.

In a few days, I rushed to catch up on the complete text. Overall, I feel good. The only shortcoming is that the first dozen chapters may be a little bit toxic. If you can keep reading, you will find that it is actually quite good. Although the author has been saying that his writing is not good, but actually reading it, I feel that it is really good. What I like most is the interaction between the male and female protagonists in their daily lives. It is very touching and not deliberate or artificial. I hope the author will continue to work hard [please read carefully]

This book is very interesting overall, and I feel very good about it. Although the author's writing style is indeed relatively poor, he writes it very sincerely, and you will feel more comfortable when reading this novel. (Although several fighting scenes are a la carte, and there are several lyrical scenes, which are difficult to express the feelings, and they are low-pitched.) However, it has indeed surpassed many online articles. I hope the author will continue to work hard💪

Look forward to it. Come on. Don't write about feelings. If you don't know how to write, you can write about family, friendship, friendship and kindness. As for the protagonist, I hope to become a calm person, the kind of person who talks less and does things more. Come on, come on [Blow kiss] Also, can it be a bit more serious? After all, it is a national organization. It would be great if you open a store and create a secret passage or a suburban building or some kind of barrier. Otherwise, just write it as an internal organization so that things can be done easily. But if the people don't know, you have to sign a confidentiality agreement. Although it's okay to hide it, it's still uncomfortable to look at it like this.

It was obvious from the beginning that the author's writing style was not good, and I was confused as to what it meant, and no one who was reading could tell the difference. But after about 100 chapters, I started to notice that the author has made obvious progress and his writing is becoming clearer and clearer. Come on. Support you

First of all, the plot of the story is very good and the main theme is right. Don't force things like writing and don't think rigidly about how to write well. Write according to your own ideas and write your own style. Good writing is good. Blindly trying to write well is not effective. I really like the content. I hope the author persists. There is still hope. The title of the book is indeed too bad and does not fit with the article. Although the level of God-killing is not good, it is related to the content. It is recommended to change the title. The content is too simple. Writing a book is not easy. Think deeply and broadly. I look forward to the author's progress. Won't the author read it? [Crying]

I really hope this book doesn't have a female protagonist. The male protagonist has trouble getting over the "brother-sister hurdle" in his heart. The younger sister didn't marry anyone else and waited until she died of natural old age. This kind of be ending is unlikely [makes a face]

The writing is good, keep it up, I hope it doesn't end badly.

I have read about 2/3 of the book, and I feel it is pretty good. The protagonist group is not too outrageous. Although the protagonist himself is indeed a bit outrageous, it is not too much. Although there may be some shortcomings in logic, compared to the works in Tomato, it is already above average. As the author said, there are many shadows of popular Tomato books. It is definitely worth giving five stars.

A good book, not a fast-food novel, the characters are well drawn, and it has both bright spots and pitfalls. However, he actually mastered filling in the pits well, so the suspense and surprise are very good. The story structure and pace are not good, and the sense of humor is just right, which is a bonus. Please accept the book, it is worth reading

The overall plot trend of the book is very similar to that of Zhan Shen Shen. The author prefers "linkage". Reading this book gives me a very familiar feeling, that is, many of the plots have been seen similar in other places, but the author's writing style is good (the author himself said that the writing style is not very good, but I think it is okay) and it does not seem so stiff. The choice to face Leng Feng in the first part may be very poisonous (personal opinion). Just skip it, it's not that important. Overall this book is really good.

Very good, very realistic and relaxing writing. It's not poisonous, I hope it will be better in the future [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]