I’m Afraid I Can’t Keep My Ability a Secret Much Longer

The ending was too rushed, so I gave it one less star [laughs]

After watching the finale, let me share my thoughts. This is a book with a lot of typos. It feels like the author wrote it in a hurry and didn't have time to proofread it. But this book is a good story worth reading~ The author's description of love is very clean, his description of family affection is simple and touching, and his description of friendship is profound and realistic. Most of the content is enjoyable, and occasionally there are some chapters that are so boring that people want to give up and stop reading. Fortunately, I persisted in reading it~ The ending is a bit abrupt. I thought it would be the same as the later development of other books, to expand the world of the protagonist, but it unexpectedly ended at the right place, so I just stopped reading it! This is very worthy of praise!

It's very beautiful, very detailed, and very good. I hope the author can become popular. I'm really afraid that the novel I like will become useless. It ended suddenly, as if I had a real dream. Thank you to the author for the experience.

It's quite fun to watch and play, the growth history of a male protagonist, cheating on his eyes, and upgrading along the way. A lot happened along the way to marry the eldest daughter of the Qin family. Love is clean. Although there are many people who admire the male protagonist, they are not bloody and are written in the details.

Work it faster, work it faster, the donkeys of the production team can plow faster than you.

An excellent work, although it is far from a masterpiece, but compared with so many brainless novels on the Tomato platform, it is considered a vanilla. The overall narrative is smooth and the plug-ins are very large, but the narrative is basically logical, and the legendary plot stories are a little too imaginative. This is probably the reason for the hasty ending! The characters have their own characteristics. The only pity is that the supporting characters are not three-dimensional. However, as a qualified food book, it is more than enough. I look forward to the author's progress in the new book.

Don't know why the score is so low. Maybe some of the twists and turns were a bit abrupt, and the ending wasn't very exciting. I felt like I just ended it like this without having anything to say. But overall, the story is still watchable, and it also tries hard to tell some truths. Although the writing style is a bit stiff, it can make people understand what is being said. So it should be considered qualified. As a balance, I'll set it higher.

It's okay, but it's a small pity that the other women don't have their husbands as they wish. After all, the writing is a bit short, but it's not good if it's too long. If you start to cultivate immortality, it will be a bad book. The values ​​promoted in this book are very valuable, and you don't have to open a harem and become a scumbag. It's just that the protagonist is a little too low-key. Those self-righteous people sometimes make me want to jump in and beat them up. There are still many pitfalls and the hasty ending is a major shortcoming. Some shark-arm endings have not been written like Lei Xiao. Zhao Peng's love story and Qin Baoxiang's final monologue were a little rushed, but the rest were pretty good. Too many typos are the biggest problem!

Big cheers for the author! Give you five stars. It's still very enjoyable to watch.

Read Chapter 70. Written with great care. To be honest, the jade industry has not been having a good time in recent years. I specifically chose the previous timeline to write. Fine.