I’m Afraid I Can’t Keep My Ability a Secret Much Longer

The ending was too rushed, so I'm deducting one star 😆

After watching the finale, I'd like to share my thoughts. This book has quite a few typos, and it feels like the author wrote it in a hurry and didn't have time to proofread. But this book is a good story worth reading. The author's descriptions of love are pure, of family affection are simple and touching, and of friendship are profound and realistic.

It's very good, very detailed, and very addictive. I hope the author becomes famous; I'm so afraid that my favorite novel will be forgotten. It ended abruptly, like a real dream. Thank you to the author for the experience.

It's quite entertaining to watch; it's a coming-of-age story about a male protagonist who, with his superhuman eyesight, levels up rapidly. He goes through many trials in his quest to marry the eldest daughter of the Qin family. The love story is pure. Although many people admire the male lead, the story is not melodramatic; it's all conveyed through subtle details.

Hurry up, hurry up! Even the production team's donkeys can plow faster than you.

An excellent work, though far from a masterpiece, it's a refreshing change compared to the many mindless novels on the Tomato platform. The overall narrative flows smoothly, with plenty of plot twists, but the story is generally logical. The legendary plot is a bit over-the-top, which is probably why the ending feels rushed.

I don't know why my score is so low. Perhaps some of the plot twists felt abrupt, and the ending wasn't particularly exciting. I feel like there's not much more to say, so let's just end it here. Overall, the story is still watchable and tries to convey some lessons. Although the writing style is a bit stiff, it makes sense to the reader. So I guess it should be considered acceptable. To balance things out, I'll set it higher.

It's alright, but it's a bit of a shame that the other female characters don't have suitable husbands. After all, there aren't many "cool" stories. But it's not good if it gets too long either. If it started with cultivation, it would really become a bad book. The values promoted in this book are very valuable. It doesn't involve having a harem or a scumbag boyfriend.

Keep up the good work, author! Five stars for you. It was a very enjoyable read.

I've read 70 chapters. It's very well written. To be honest, the jade industry hasn't been doing well these past few years. The author specifically chose to write based on a past timeline. It's quite good.