A Carefree Journey for Two

I really like this kind of plain and warm feeling. It feels much better for a couple to travel together and experience life in a different world than to travel alone and then conquer all kinds of amnesia~ I am so envious of this opportunity. If my wife and I can go to other worlds and live our lives for the rest of our lives when we are old, I will be very greedy just thinking about it [Envy] I wish I could have such an opportunity Come on, author!

It's good to read. I was very excited to read it. I finished it in one go. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Interesting Interesting Very interesting! This is the only book I have read that is about couples traveling through time together, and every time it is beautiful and beautiful. The content is long, but it is not particularly long, and it is short. It also has a lot of details! And I have experienced many different worlds, which seems to be quite enjoyable. I hope the author will make more exciting content in the future! Pen refill~❤❤❤❤❤

If you like to read about fast-traveling revenge and slaps in the face, you can go. This one is more relaxed and leisurely. There are no top-notch ones that come to irritate people, and there is no cliché about revenge and slaps in the face for the original owner. Everyone is good, and occasionally some small thoughts are not painful. It deserves the name. I am too tired from work, so I like this kind of relaxed and leisurely. Farming is too boring, so I just found this book that has something to do but is not complicated. It is great. I support you, the author. I saw some bad comments in some comments today. I just want to say stick to your heart.

Please have more emotional lines! ! ! ! ! Just waiting for help from CP! Between the emotional line and the plot line, one must stand out in order to retain readers! ! ! ! It has more emotional lines and is sweeter! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh The writing style is a bit childish and has the feel of a running account. There are a lot of "haha", "~" and "..." In the article, which looks very childish. It is recommended to use "." Instead of "~". It's okay to use it once in a while, but if you use it frequently, it's really childish and a bit embarrassing. Also, the characters of the male and female protagonists are very frivolous and superficial, and they are not well portrayed. Even the interaction between the two of them seems to have very few words to use, and it feels like industrial saccharine, which makes it impossible to talk about CP even if you want to. Finally, regarding the use of realistic scripts in the novel, describing the content of the script in detail is suspected of being hydrological. I don't know how to describe the description and shaping of the heroine's friends in the article, but it can sometimes cause discomfort. In short, couples' quick wear is quite novel, but it is really not easy to write it well, to be novel and charming. This novel is not for old bookworms. There are still many areas that need to be improved, so please give your best!

It looks good, I think it makes people look at it very easily! Really beautiful

It's really good-looking. I'm currently reading the article Tianyuan Sangma. The protagonist couple came from the end of the world. With the help of the system, they cheated all the way. It's not abusive at all. It's good-looking and good-looking. I have finished reading it now, so is the new book by the author a continuation of this one? Looking at the introduction of that book, it seems that it can be connected with the finale!

Advantages: The setting of the story background is unique, the plot is full of tension and attractive, and the stories in each small world are very interesting. Disadvantages: There are some problems with the image creation of the male and female protagonists. In the early stage, the love interaction between the two was sometimes like a street gangster teasing, and sometimes like a prostitute visiting a flower house, which was very greasy. Maybe it was because he became a semi-immortal in the later period? Oh, that awesome guy is coaxing and condescending. He is about to become a Buddha in several small worlds. He teaches villains and is the enemy of the original owner? What is that? It's like a diaosi counterattacked and became a saint! Personally, I feel that if the image and temperament of the male and female protagonists were more calm and dignified, if the frivolous words and deeds were less frivolous, and if the hatred of the original protagonist was more taken into account, it would be an excellent fast-traveling novel!

It's very beautiful. The male and female protagonists travel through the world hand in hand. It's very colorful. The male protagonist also quite dotes on the female protagonist. The male and female protagonists are both the Holy Father and the Holy Mother. Each world forcibly cleanses the "relatives" who caused the original owner's tragedy and makes the other person live a better life than before. It is really unacceptable. The male and female protagonists have understood the causal relationship with the original owner. The original owner's physical parents and relatives should not care about them. They have nothing to do with the male and female protagonists, so why should they care about them? It's too Holy Father and Holy Mother, and it becomes more and more outrageous later on, so it's still two stars. I finally finished watching it. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is so enviable. The male protagonist has always doted on the female protagonist, but I just can't accept that the two did not retaliate against the person who hurt the original protagonist, but instead made the other person's life better. I don't like this. I will give it two more stars.

It looks good, but there are too few, not enough to read. The author should update it quickly! Come on, come on, I hope it will get better and better