Tomb Raiding Sign-In: After Gaining Immortality, I Became Brothers with My Grandpa

Ren Xunsheng, Zhang Qiling, two stuffy oil bottles Zhou An, Wu Xie, two unlucky evil bodies Double the happiness(✪▽✪) It's really beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's like reading Tomb Raider Notes. I can see that there are foreshadowings in some places. However, the number of words is not very large, so the rest of the story has not been laid out yet. The writing style is rigorous and compact, and it is not a novice. From the beginning, it can be seen that the story structure is complete and meaningful, but we need to look at the back before making a conclusion. The growth-oriented protagonist is quite good, but the early scenes at the beginning are a bit lacking. Obviously, it was a bit upstaged by other characters. I hope that in the later period, it can gradually be realized to complete the whole character of the protagonist to make him more charming. There are some roundness and some flaws. The protagonist will inevitably have stumbling blocks on his way to growth, and it will inevitably not go smoothly (as the saying goes, you will hit the wall when you should hit it. Let's start when it's time to start. Anyway, we have the halo of the protagonist, don't panic), only then can there be authenticity and a sense of substitution. This is also one of the conditions for attracting people. My thoughts after reading it carefully are that it is a book with layers and depth. In short, it is good-looking. Brothers will be done with it after reading this book.

This book is really good. The characters in it make me twice as happy, especially the two characters with unlucky physiques, two god-like beings, and a fat mother.

Cheers to the author, write well and don't give up. The subject matter is very good. It's rare to see this kind of evil CP that doesn't break the bottle, and the protagonist also has his own CP. I hope the author can include more interactions between the protagonist and CP later on. It doesn't matter if the iron triangle becomes a hexagon or a pentagon. They will become good friends and trust each other, and then they will find the secret of immortality.

Ouch! It's so pretty! ! ! When will there be sweet holding hands and kisses? I wait and wait and wait, wuwuwu, Shengzai and Anan will kiss soon! ! ! ! ! Press hard!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhw. [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] It's the episode 9 that breaks my guard. Baby An An is too tired from walking all the way. But in the future, I will have a baby to protect me. Hmm~hin makes me feel reassured~ I think the baby will be like my little brother, becoming more and more smoky. Kang Jianyi, live a healthy and simple life. This is also the best wish for him. Finally, I would like to express my condolences to my wife. The wives I see in many comment areas are so cute and gentle, and the characters in the writing are also very good ~ [Blow a kiss] [Flow a kiss] [Flow a kiss] Where can I find such a perfect wife!

It's really super good-looking. I finished it in one go. The protagonist is a growth type, and his experience is similar to that of Wu Xie. Moreover, the physique of the man who must get rid of the corpse when he opens the restaurant is even better than that of Wu Xie. Ren Xunsheng is also good, but he is less talkative than the younger brother. The plot has ups and downs, and is both funny and a little scary. Especially when I was watching it alone in bed at night, it was super exciting! ! ! The author's writing style is very good, and the sense of substitution is very strong. It is really not a loss to invest [like][like][like]

Yes, the logic of the plot is very smooth, and the little brother and other characters are not weakened. The complaints are also very humorous. The characters of Fatty Wu Xie are all standing up, and Sheng Zai and An An are also cute (><)

It's super good-looking, especially without breaking the bottle. It's like the second pair of innocence and brother. They don't just copy it mechanically, but come out with a new one. It's just too slow. I'll take a few days to take a look at it, but that's it! What should I do if all the books I like are serialized but not enough? [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy] I can't live this life.

The setting is quite fresh, and Zhou An is even worse than the innocent. It's so miserable and unlucky. The author's writing is super beautiful. I look forward to more updates👍👍