Surrounded by Zombies: I Am a Survivor

Guys, I am the author Tianshang Yefeng. After my first book "No Survival", I still published this. This time "I Am a Survivor" is unsystematic, incompetent, basically without the help of any major forces, and powerful zombies are randomly refreshed. It will be a bit frustrating to a certain extent. I tried my best to follow my own ideas from the perspective of the protagonist. It can be regarded as my immersive doomsday experience! Then, everyone is welcome to read this book together, let's make progress and work hard together! Come on! 😜😜😜

Overall, it's pretty good. My personal suggestion to the author is to make the country's power stronger in the later stage. In this way, the overall story will be stronger, and there will be a lot of room for development. The protagonist can also be written into the regular army, and then written from the perspective of the army, it can improve the entire story. The world view and breadth of the story, after all, there are many patriots in Tomato, which can improve the overall height. At the same time, few writing about the apocalypse with the army can attract some readers, but it is still very good to read a lot of superpower systems. Such a simple zombie novel is still very good. Come on, author, I believe in you [Love]

I read it once in class when I was a sophomore in high school (I saw it on bqg), and then I was so bored during this period that I suddenly thought of this book, but I couldn't find it. After looking for it for a long time, I found it on Tomato. It's a pity that it's not updated anymore, I think it's very interesting.

I have never written a novel, but I have read no less than 100 apocalyptic novels. 1,000 People have 1,000 different views on the end of the world. The author cannot go there and experience it personally. The author must have read it, and also wants to write about an apocalyptic world that is, well, more satisfying to his own spiritual world. But it's a little sloppy in the front, and it's powerful in the mid-term, but not much. The characterization of the protagonist is still okay. The characters in this book are full of flesh and blood. But the plot is a bit lacking. I hope the author can revise the previous chapters. The difficulty in writing apocalyptic writing is that it is not as easy and comfortable as urban writing. In the mid-term, too many dialogues should be shortened. . It seems that there is still much room for improvement. The reason why the rating slowly gets lower is because it was unattractive at the beginning. There is a certain sense of immersion, but it is too far-fetched. Give it five-star praise and hope the author will work hard! [Thinking][laughing evilly][covering face]

A little weird, but okay

From my own point of view, the first 100 chapters reflect a kind person. Contradictory character. I don't know if everyone realizes it. When doing something, there will always be some contradiction. Apart from the emotions and career outlook, the character description is good.

The writing is good, mainly because of clear ideas, normal narrative sequence and concise language.

The score shouldn't be so low. The recording method is very realistic, first person, and has a strong sense of experience. Remember to fill in the pitfalls.