My Own Swordsman: The New Tongfu Inn

The TV series "Wulin Gaiden" is playing and I feel very comfortable reading this novel. Hey bro! We haven't seen you for a long time. Where are you? Hey friend, if it's really you, say hi! Hey bro! We haven't seen you for a long time. Where are you? Hey friend, if it's really you, say hi! Don't smile at me, no one will care Don't cry to me, no one will be helpless In fact, everyone already knows I've set foot on a road of no return I said long time no see where are you going? But you said to me, I will go to the Jianghu Love and hate, no one will admit defeat Dancing with swords is not cool at all Come on, warm up a pot of good wine Tell me, tell me how hard it was It's hard to know what's going on, you're smart and you're confused The love between children is long, caring and worried You and I need to endure loneliness more Walking alone, a hero has no origin Smile a friend, and happiness will be countless After drinking this pot, let's go on our way Hey bro! Hey friends! Hey bro! We haven't seen you for a long time. Where are you? Hey friend, if it's really you, say hi! Hey bro! We haven't seen you for a long time. Where are you? Hey friend, if it's really you, say hi!

Overall, the structure is very good. It dug some new pits and filled in some of the pits in the novel. It also gave us a group of people an ending on the other hand, and the characters did not force dialogue to follow the plot. From this point of view, the author's outline is still very good, but I suggest that it be written around the life in the inn as much as possible, because Wulin Gaiden represents a lot of things. If the author writes too big, can he be careful not to mention it, but there will definitely be some people who don't like it, because people The objects are too messy but it affects the overall viewing experience. This will affect the direction of this book. I hope the author can give everyone a good result in Wulin Gaiden, even if it is not what we imagined, and then write the new group of people with more soul. The character dialogues still have room for improvement. Try to open as few maps as possible outside the Seven Heroes Town. Just open the relevant characters. After all, youth, I don't want to change too much, so I think this book is more of an explanation of youth. I also hope that readers will give me more support and encouragement, don't be too picky, and just let this book develop naturally in a good direction. Finally, I hope that the author can keep writing. I wish the author's work will be a hit and his writing will be like a god. My humble opinion is, don't criticize or criticize.

I wanted to give you 10 points, but unfortunately I can only give you a five. I just saw Zhu Xiaoming's identity, and I feel that the story frame is very big. How much will his identity affect the direction of the story? I really don't want to see it affect it too much. After all, most fan fiction about Wulin Gaiden is about emotions. Reading it now is very relaxing and enjoyable. Today, Saturday, I am lying on the tatami in the sun and reading a novel. The pictures will automatically play in my mind. It is very pleasant. I panicked when I saw that the progress was already 73%. After all, there are still only a few chapters and I will finish it soon... I'll read it now if I have the book. I think the way the new characters are handled is very good. The new accountant appears so suddenly. I think it fits the story very well. However, I was a little disappointed at the beginning. However, the reappearance of several old people and the familiar lines made me quickly start to look forward to the story of the New Tongfu Inn. However, I feel that the emotional drama of the protagonist is a bit too fast. I don't know if the author wants to make up for the regrets of the original work as soon as possible. I think it should be delayed a little longer and written slowly to get more flavor and give you more words and chapters.

Very good. I have a deep affection for Wulin Gaiden. I want it to accompany me to sleep every day. It was sad to see them separate at the beginning of this book. However, the author introduced the new characters very well and did not make me feel disgusted or stiff. I feel very good about every Wulin Gaiden. I also understand the characters of the protagonists quite well, and I also have a good grasp of their speaking characteristics. So far, this is one of the better ones for me. I can't stand the rest of them after reading only one or two chapters. The author's writing is so confusing that I feel that the framework of this book is very large. I hope to continue writing it well [Salute]

It's finished today, and this book is indeed worth 8 points. At the beginning, the flavor of Tongfu Inn is very strong, and it is easy to bring readers in. Later, it goes too far. Many new characters and experiences are added to the story about pig's feet. Finally, the old and new characters gather in the inn. The whole story takes the history of the Ming Dynasty as the main line and the characters' emotions as the branch line. And Xiao Li Tanhua, is he considered a part of the inn (maybe like Huilan) Overall, this is one of the better stories among Wulin Gaiden. I hope the author won't delay updating the next novel! ! !

Yes, the content is reasonable and not broken, the characterization is okay, and the plot is interesting. It is worth watching in the same series.

The content is well written. After reading it, I will read chapter after chapter.

Small inn, big rivers and lakes, plain and simple is the real thing, this novel can be regarded as one of the top ones among the sequels of Wulin Gaiden!

This rating is obviously not in line with this book. I think this book is very interesting. The story and characters are well developed. It can be said that it will be a second part. Although the protagonist is not invincible, the invincible novel is not particularly interesting to watch. Come on author, I feel this book should be rated at 9 or more. This can be considered a masterpiece of this martial arts story.

It's good-looking. It's my first time watching a Wulin Gaiden fanfic, and I didn't expect it to be so good-looking.