Rippling Fire

At this point in the story, I really want him to be BE. Li Yang seems powerful, but in fact he is the most miserable person in this game. No one seems to trust him, whether it is Chong Ming or Jiang Huan. Jiang Huan is the one I can't understand. Everything he does is for Li Yang, but something seems wrong. Zhou Zhou, Gu Qing, Xiao Xu, Yun Sheng, Ai Xi, Aunt Ning and his wife, all of them are influencing Li Yang. This story is very special, and this game is indeed cruel, but what I want to say is actually those who are responsible for Li Yang. I feel that they are not qualified. No matter how much Jiang Huan has done, touching the bottom line is the bottom line, and why should he choose to scold Li Yang because of what he has done. Before reading the book, I read the book review. The author said that Li Yang is an ordinary woman. Indeed, she is a strong and intelligent person, but she is also very weak. This book does not want to be a blind novel. The plot is compact and quite good.

The author's writing is very good, but I think the ending of the plot should be better now. What he said does not make sense. Titian is better than family in the heroine's heart, and the heroine's mother is also very important to the heroine, and has a heavy weight in the heroine's heart. These two are the bottom line of the heroine, but the male protagonist is indeed related to these two. The heroine also knows that her mother is in the hands of the hero. The heroine is also a king in her own field and has a very clear mind. The heroine also said, "If there is any deviation between what you do next and what you said today, I will take your life back without hesitation. After all, your life was given by me." This shows that the hero has something to hide from the heroine. The heroine has now begun to murder the hero, and the two are rivals. The hero has also touched the heroine's bottom line. This is no longer a problem that can be easily solved. There is already hatred. Moreover, there was already a gap between the two, and now the gap is even greater. If the heroine is still with the hero, it seems that her bottom line can be stepped on. In short, the ending will be better (only personal opinion)

It's really good-looking. The characters are well-developed. Although the heroine is ruthless, she is not a person without any emotions. The supporting characters are also very vivid. There is no scene that forcibly lowers the IQ (there are no brainless female or male characters). The only thing that makes me regret is that there are too few. I look forward to the author's new book. Come on, author!

The characters are created very well. But I feel like Jiang Huan doesn't admire Li Yang, because he never consults with Li Yang about anything he does, thinks he is good to Li Yang, and doesn't speak up for Li Yang when everyone accuses her. Is his subordinate not as good as his lover?

The character design of this story is quite attractive to me. The plot line can be more complete. I can try be and oe for the final ending. Now that I see it, I feel that if it is he, I may be sorry for the character design of this book. After all, both of them are powerful people, and they still have a deep hatred for each other. Even the heroine's mother is related to him. No matter how much he loves, the heroine is also sober. I brought in the character and they should not be together.

How should I put it? After reading this book, I was even a little depressed and reluctant to leave. The heroine admired me very much, but it also made me feel distressed. She had encountered so many things. She was supposed to enjoy the pampering of her parents, the company of friends, her own happiness or acting like a spoiled child. She already had a calmness and decisiveness that this person would never have in her life. But fortunately, she got what she deserved in the end. I can't say that I hate him, but I don't like the fact that the hero thinks he is protecting the heroine and has done a lot of things. I think a character like the heroine deserves to be completely candid. I cried when I saw the part about the queen. I really felt it was a pity and super sad. As for this book, the storyline is very direct and fast. I like it very much, but the ending was written too hastily. I feel that some things are still not explained clearly, such as what happened to the hero's parents, but it does not affect the overall effect. I like it very much!

This is the first book I reviewed before I finished reading it (I only read Chapter 43). There was no skipping chapters. I had the same feeling as when I read Qin Ran, similar but different. The horse-riding of the unknown protagonist of "Ma Jia Shuang" is also a surprise for the audience. This is something that the "Ma Jia Shuang" novel does not have, and it is also what I like very much. I have seen many book reviews saying that it should be, not such an ending. I think the final ending of every character in each article is carefully thought out by the author. They can have any outcome. Life is not so cookie-cutter. This is a story written by the author. He will give the characters in his story a satisfactory and reasonable ending.

I really love this book. The author describes the characters very well. Unlike other Ma Jia novels, the heroine is so powerful that no one can match her. Jiang Huan will always prefer Li Yang, and Li Yang will always love Jiang Huan. I think the Cheng Shu in the article is also very well written by the author [love] [love] [love] [send heart]

Speaking of which, this book is still very interesting. As for why its rating is 7:04? I guess it's because of my big belly, what he wrote is really a bit too long, and the fonts of more than 100 pages are still very compact. How can I say no? It makes people interested as soon as they read it, and they feel a little bit like that, a little impatient, and want to quickly turn the page to see the finale. The masters heard that this is really good. As for the writing, although it is a bit nervous, the rigor is still good, and the ending is not particularly bad. It turned out pretty good, I love it.

I didn't have high hopes at first, but the more I read about it, the more I like it. I hope the author can keep up the good work and update it! Really pretty! ! ! No loss in investing.