Pokemon: A Journey Beyond

The novel is overall good. The level structure of the elf world is perfect. The addition of transformation is a bit abrupt but useless. Since I have read the journey, I feel very happy after reading it. The elf level in the early stage of Pikachu is a bit high. I am afraid that it will end too quickly and there will be no good plot in the later stage. It is recommended to suppress the plot and not finish it too early.

How can I put it, the writing is pretty good. I have read a lot of Pokémon novels. Although this novel is not perfect, the ones I have read before are pretty good. Many of them have high ratings but are vicious, and many have low ratings, but they are still very interesting. In fact, yours is not unsightly, but it just has a lot of ideas. You can easily see it in the novel. You just Like many novice authors I have seen before, they have good ideas, but they cannot be integrated into the novel. Your novel starts well, but when your ideas cannot be integrated into the novel, the readers will feel unreasonable, or even uncomfortable, or even unacceptable. It depends on your ideas and whether they are well integrated. The better and more reasonable the integration, the more acceptable it will be to readers. [Laughing] Let me give you a word of advice, those who like Pokémon may not necessarily like you, and those who don't like Pokémon may like you. ? [Laughs] Be optimistic and embrace the world with your heart, and you won't care about the discomfort.

It's good to read. It only needs ten chapters a day! Bangela, Biting Land Shark, Metagross, Tyrannosaurus, Lucario, Gardevoir, arrange it quickly

I would call this book the strongest! Play with two of my favorite female characters, Sirona and Serena, at the same time! The author understands me! ! !

This book is very good, I like it very much, but can the author write about the harem?

The only elf novel I can read at the moment is very good. I wonder if the plot of the theatrical version will be added? Because the theatrical version is almost incompatible with the main plot of the anime, if they are added, I hope to include some powerful ones in the theatrical version. [Code to live][code to live][code to live]

Well done, I hope the author, Duo Duo, a dog abuser, has grown displeased with him a long time ago. Because I have given up on his animations and only watch them when Zhi Ye is at home. Now the battles in the animation are not exciting anymore. I hope the author can make the battle plots more exciting.

The plot is smooth. Although the writing is flawed, I don't care. The key is that it's fun. That's enough. But I hope the author can write more about the emotional line with Pikachu. (Big brother, please help me, I'm too unlucky, all the holy relics are useless, all tm rock element damage bonus (sad) After watching it for so long, I always felt that it was shortcomings. I finally realized that Xiaozhi without the support of "Pika Pika" during the battle has no soul! My Pikachu, my whole family is in a state of desolation. We can take a bath without it, go on the road without it, and win without him. My poor Pikachu, oooooh, so pitiful.

It can be regarded as one of the few Zhiye fanfics in Tomato. The combat power is not broken. It is very interesting and the plot is very coherent.

4 Stars is not bad. Although the protagonist of this Pokémon fanfic is Ash Ketchum, it just tells a different story about Ash Ketchum's travels. It's just that it's over, and it's a pity that there's no picture of the ending…