The Heavenly Master Comes Down the Mountain to Torment His Fiancée

The beginning is very good, but in the middle it falls into a cliche. There are too many similarities with other novels. If it can have its own independent story and unique themes, it should be a good novel.

Can you see the follow-up? This book ends here Or is it the beginning of another plot?

Overall, it's good and quite exciting. I hope to continue writing a second part, otherwise this novel will have no ending and lose its perfection.

This book is quite nice

It's worth watching, the story is wonderful,

I like it very much and hope that the second part will be released.

＇It's quite exciting and worth a look!

Is it too early to end?

Not bad, hope to keep up the good work

After reading this chapter, the more exciting it becomes, give the author a thumbs up